Contrasts

CONTRASTS

This old woman
Is in her rocker,
Looking off,
With absent expression,
With lost affections,
In the sagging mouth,
Behind the eyes.

Tired, white hands rest,
One clutching a bit of fruit.
A shawl about those fragile shoulders barely warms.

She’s in a garden – inhabiting –
Head seeming to rest on a gnarled old tree,
Flowers and leaves so summer young,
Hidden mysteries everywhere,
Cloudless day, without a care.

Oh, the contrast disturbs, sickens!
The intrusion!
The inner rattle!

One struggles against ire, against pity,
Sensing both the beauty, and the decay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lwele Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 2:40 PM
Daver,great inspiration to the old and young.Keep it up.
A   Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 4:57 PM
Daver, a very fine poem.. the lady in her rocker,,reminds me of real vivid pictures i've seen...thank you always...PD
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 8:29 AM
wow, DAver, what a contrast that you made with this one. I love reading this kind of poetry that really gets to me!! GREAT imagery and lucidity! (yep, I know what you mean about dogs. We had to get rid of our dog too a long time ago)
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August 30, 2012 at 4:29 PM
A poignant write, daver. She sounds so lonely and isolated. Wrapped within a cocoon of daydreams she can find beauty and peace. Okay, I'm focusing on the lighter part of this write.:) Best wishes! Love, Mikki
Maverick Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 3:43 PM
A chapter of contrasting observations and scene over scenery Daver, enjoyed the read muhc indeed:) Take care Joe..
Ellison Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 3:37 PM
A winner, my friend! Really enjoyed your little tale, Dave... cheers, Jack
Mjelde Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 6:13 PM
Nice poem, enjoyed it!!! Hugs Laila
Gorelick Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Now, this is my kind of poetry..so very good Dave-r. BG
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