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Naani Form 4 lines 20-25 syllables

half a world away-trite, honey butters me up, with spectacles and cute smile, good morning-good night

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Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 2:02:00 PM

Ah, clever! I know what you mean.

Paige Hind
Date: 1/31/2024 8:38:00 PM

Yes, you're right. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 5:51:00 PM

At least we have FaceTime!

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/30/2024 2:29:00 AM

That's super cute Kim! So playful and funny. Really brought a smile to my face.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2024 3:50:00 AM

Thank you, Robert!

Bill Baker

Date: 1/29/2024 6:33:00 PM

Fun and romantic, Kim. I like it! Interesting form of poetry, my friend. Write On! Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2024 8:34:00 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/29/2024 12:34:00 PM

This is so cute dear Kim. Love your choice of crafted words that flow so well and says so much. The more I read other poets wonderful poems the more I’m amazed at all these different forms. Thank you for sharing this and giving me the chance to learn more.Really enjoyed it. Hugs xx :):)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2024 4:20:00 PM

So happy you liked! Hugs :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/29/2024 4:33:00 AM

So interesting Kim ( of course, I had to look up the form!) I am still deciphering the meaning that I am taking from it! I love your take on that form! happy Monday xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2024 4:39:00 AM

Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/29/2024 3:54:00 AM

You're going to keep me awake with this poem :) Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2024 4:39:00 AM

LOL!:)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/28/2024 3:34:00 PM

as sweet as honey, Kim! Loved it, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 9:35:00 PM

Thank you, sweet one!

Pardy Mupfumbu

Date: 1/28/2024 2:56:00 PM

interesting piece of well mastered words

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 9:35:00 PM

Thank you, Pardy!

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/28/2024 12:09:00 PM

This is sweet! Well done :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 1:58:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi!

Silent One

Date: 1/28/2024 11:47:00 AM

Nice use of the form once again..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 1:58:00 PM

Thank you!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/28/2024 7:11:00 AM

Ah i want to try naani too, love this, so cute and beautiful and is so heartfelt, theres nothing we need in this mundane life, more than a honey that butters us up, or makes our day and night. Pleasure reading your work dear kim. Sending you light today and always

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 10:17:00 AM

Blessings your way, sweet poet!