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Confusion

I bled for you so many days. I tampered with evidence in so many ways. I left you alone with no tears to cry. All my ears can hear is you sigh. Forgotten memories forced into my skull. I’m emptied when I used to be full. I took for granted the love that we shared. I could never accept that you really cared. Afraid of forgiveness while frantic. I turned around and saw you panic. Too many books left unread. Too many times I’ve been declared dead. I am confused under your pillow tonight. The fear doesn’t make us wrong or right. Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: April 26, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/27/2016 4:00:00 PM
With this write I am drawn to your library! I won't make a sound...I'll just quietly read and feel!
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/28/2016 7:37:00 AM
thank you Walter :)-luloo
Date: 4/27/2016 11:47:00 AM
Captivating write, my dear. One is drawn into the turmoil and left to wonder who things will be resolved. That is the beauty of poetry. Hugs
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Date: 4/27/2016 2:39:00 PM
many thanks Eileen :)-luloo
Date: 4/26/2016 9:40:00 PM
great poem Laura, a 7 here.
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/27/2016 10:48:00 AM
thank you very much Lewis, that makes me smile :)-luloo
Date: 4/26/2016 5:44:00 PM
a mysterious one here!! A great read!
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/27/2016 10:48:00 AM
many thanks Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 4/26/2016 3:18:00 PM
Laura, a lovely read for sure, deep and dark just the way I like it, and I am loving it 7 ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/26/2016 5:18:00 PM
thank you very much Broken Wings :)-luloo

Book: Shattered Sighs