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She asks him if her butt looks Big In last years summer dress My dear you look Hot in that It accentuates I must confess And are these streaks too brassy On my mousey shade of brown My dear you pull it off with style You wear it like a crown She points to her crows feet Are they getting worse each day It lends character to your features And that's my final say Then she goes for closure Will you love me till I die I'll love you to the moon and back He whispers with a sigh So ladies the next time you declare In a voice so strong That you are ALWAYS RIGHT And He is ALWAYS WRONG And if your man agrees with you IS HE RIGHT OR WRONG???

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/26/2018 10:23:00 PM

Witty. Much enjoyed your poem, Maria.

Maria Williams
Date: 1/27/2018 5:25:00 AM

Thanks so much Line, so glad you got a chuckle out of this....Maria

Old Buck

Date: 11/26/2017 4:32:00 PM

Maria: BRAVO ! After 57 yrs of marriage, I've still not learned what this fellow knew. And your ending was "excellent". Thanks for sharing this insight into "peaceful" living. Thanks for sharing it with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Maria Williams
Date: 11/27/2017 4:22:00 AM

Its a Wise Man who knows how to answer like him Oldbuck, but after 57 years of marriage, i'm sure you could teach him a lesson or two . Congratulations on your long successful married life....Maria

Robert J Moore

Date: 5/8/2017 5:03:00 AM

Fantastic, I thought I was the only man with the perfect woman, but it would seem we all are, really enjoyed it x

Maria Williams
Date: 5/8/2017 6:38:00 AM

Thanks so much for the visit and comment Bob, good to hear from you. I'll see you on your page.....Maria

Joseph Soper

Date: 5/3/2017 4:16:00 AM

Don't think there's a man who doesn't follow those simple lines.... I just made an agreement with my missus a long time ago Dont ask questions you dont want the answers to ;) Well done!!

Maria Williams
Date: 5/3/2017 5:12:00 AM

Lol, oh wise one!! You'll survive. Thanks for the visit Joseph Maria

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/1/2017 10:10:00 AM

Hi Maria , beautiful fun write and if she looked like the girl in the picture she would always be right lol :)) hugs from Ireland

Maria Williams
Date: 5/2/2017 7:34:00 AM

Lol Niall. In one of the comments below , Richard Olsen says " I'm sorry Maria, I'm still looking at the image in the mirror. What did your poem say again?" No wonder you men get yourselves into trouble!!

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/1/2017 1:06:00 PM

When there is noting more to say why cloud it with fluff, as per the old adage “less is more”. Good little ditty with a whimsical feel good beat. Emile.

Maria Williams
Date: 4/18/2017 9:18:00 PM

Thanks Emile, only just catching up on my replies, work, and the inclusion of the two poems composed while away, after returning from a beautiful holiday in Hawaii - Hope you like them.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/29/2017 7:46:00 AM

This poem is lovely and witty, Maria:) I can safely say that any man in love with a woman loves her for who she is, and he would not be looking for imperfections!! Regards // paul

Maria Williams
Date: 3/29/2017 10:28:00 PM

Lol. Paul I'm not that vain, but I have in contact with this situation with some young women I know and its quite funny to see certain young men being placed in this predicament and coming out with the 'corniest replies', to please their partners. But as I suggest if all else fails there's always chocolate and dinner?

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 3/27/2017 9:12:00 AM

I loved that 'she said, he said' amusing and delightful poem, which is filled with wit, wisdom and truth.:) Amitiés

Maria Williams
Date: 3/27/2017 6:46:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Marie, this was written with a certain young woman in mind Lol!! Thanks for the visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2017 4:31:00 AM

- Rely always on yourself - I agree with you: "That you are ALWAYS RIGHT And He is ALWAYS WRONG" :)))) - Lovely poem, Maria - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams
Date: 3/27/2017 9:02:00 AM

Haha, you got it right. Thanks Anne-Lise. Hugs back

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/26/2017 5:00:00 AM

Good Morning Maria. Welcome to PoetrySoup by the way. I just joined also about two weeks before you it seems. I hope you are enjoying it here. I know I am. As for your entry Maria. I found it endearing on both sides hers and his. Your words prove to me there is love. And yes there is love in compromise and in peace. With love there is no wrong. Nice work on the title also. Well done throughout.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/26/2017 6:29:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely warm welcome Lisa and welcome to you too. So glad that you're in your element over here, you are a wonderful poet, you belong here. I on the other hand am a "poet", of sorts. For me it is just a little happy diversion in a very busy life. I do enjoy reading all of your wonderful poets work . Keep writing you belong here. Thanks for the visit Lisa.

Darren White

Date: 3/26/2017 3:38:00 AM

Lovely Maria, and at the same time it makes me smile. I am a little bit like that, vain and stylish, and always asking my boyfriend things like this, thinking I am always right, hahaha.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/26/2017 6:38:00 PM

Thanks for the comment Darren. You are perfect and I'm sure do not need validation, neither do I as I have a wonderful husband who compliments me all the time. This was written for a young friend, whose husband seems to find himself in a ticklish situation if he answers wrongly, lol. Darren I will be thinkIng of you on Monday, be strong and be the Knight that we all know you to be . Blessings.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 3/26/2017 3:37:00 AM

This is a beautiful and thought provoking poem. Well-penned, Maria.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/26/2017 6:55:00 PM

Thanks so much Adeniji, both for the visit and lovely comment.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/26/2017 3:01:00 AM

What a delightful poem dear, Maria! When a man is with a woman he admits that that woman is the one he wishes to be with which leads to the conclusion that she is the best woman for him thus everything that is hers is perfect so he sees her as a work of art to be admired and wishes to change nothing. That is my opinion after living that long and having traveled around the world. Excellent my friend.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/26/2017 6:44:00 PM

Demetrius ,thanks for the visit my dear friend. I wrote this poem with a young friend in mind who seems to enjoy putting her husband in a difficult situation, LOL. You on the other hand, like my husband ever the diplomatic type would be the complimentary type of men who are so rare to find nowadays. Blessed are we the wives, who have found men like you.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/26/2017 1:58:00 AM

:) Lovely write! I wish all men would answer the way this one has done. If only....This is a delightful piece, Dear. Thanks for your visit to my poem about my daughter.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/26/2017 6:48:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Eileen. For the record, this was written for a certain young lady I know, whose husband seems to find himself in a ticklish situation if he answers wrongly, so with a little help he has learned to become more diplomatic haha.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 3/26/2017 1:19:00 AM

Oh what a brilliant write Maria. Amusing in its accuracy, well done you

Maria Williams
Date: 3/26/2017 6:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Elizabeth both for your continued support and lovely comments. I really appreciate it.