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Confluence

like a gurgling stream
laced with frothy white chiffon
life flows on quite smooth
their love too grows steadily
hurtling to a confluence

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Sara Kendrick

August 14, 2024 at 4:28 AM

Creative lines penned. Way to go. It is good that their love grows instead of going in the other direction like so many today. Sara K

Anil Deo

January 19, 2022 at 7:50 PM

I meant Rich TANKA, below). Glad I read this again. Water ... "Gurgling ... Confluence," equals good life. PTL

Anil Deo

January 11, 2022 at 3:26 PM

A rich Thanks. Water always makes for wonderful analogies. I sense U enjoyed writing this poem. Shalom shalom VG

Andrea Dietrich

January 9, 2022 at 10:11 AM

I like this and the beautiful imagery in it

Sotto Poet

January 9, 2022 at 8:37 AM

Dazzling! Valsa, you have a beautiful artistic style! There is a lot of energy when one life merges with another — I like the imagery and the flowing stream.