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Confluence

like a gurgling stream laced with frothy white chiffon life flows on quite smooth their love too grows steadily hurtling to a confluence

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2024 4:28:00 AM

Creative lines penned. Way to go. It is good that their love grows instead of going in the other direction like so many today. Sara K

Anil Deo

Date: 1/19/2022 7:50:00 PM

I meant Rich TANKA, below). Glad I read this again. Water ... "Gurgling ... Confluence," equals good life. PTL

Anil Deo

Date: 1/11/2022 3:26:00 PM

A rich Thanks. Water always makes for wonderful analogies. I sense U enjoyed writing this poem. Shalom shalom VG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2022 10:11:00 AM

I like this and the beautiful imagery in it

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/9/2022 8:37:00 AM

Dazzling! Valsa, you have a beautiful artistic style! There is a lot of energy when one life merges with another — I like the imagery and the flowing stream.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/9/2022 5:56:00 AM

Much exuberance when life merges with another--I like the comparison to stream rushing.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/9/2022 12:51:00 AM

gurgling stream - Ornamental! very poetic, Valsa! Very! Thanks - Marshall