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Confession of a Conceited Rose

Being a rose I strike a pose, I'm preening for your gaze, The flower queen by any means, entitled to high praise. Of upper class I got some sass, no equal to my spell, My thorns are sleek, adding more chic, may hurt yet meaning well. And best of all - I'm standing tall, my stem juicy and thick, I'm pampered so, nurtured to grow, I'm lovers' premier pick. My scent's refined, my petals shine, the focus of the date, But once I’ve bloomed, my beauty's doomed, the cycle of my fate. So much to lose, If I could choose, my throne of beauty queen - I would trade fast for what would last - the life of evergreen. February 19, 2023 Sponsor: Joseph May Contest: In Bloom

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Date: 3/10/2023 8:32:00 AM
Ahhh -- such a lovely last line. Your poem rocks with its smart rhymes--a joy to read Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Ann. Rose rocks it is:)
Date: 3/7/2023 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful write Margarita, Congrats on your win
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/7/2023 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your write and pink roses. Have a blessed day...............
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/7/2023 3:29:00 AM
Great to see you in list of winners, congratulations
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/6/2023 10:40:00 PM
WOW ! Nicely composed. I am charmed.Cocgrats to win. Blessings
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/6/2023 6:23:00 PM
Very beautiful, Margarita, congratulations:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 8:52:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/6/2023 4:38:00 PM
The lament of the pampered rose. Beautifully done Margarita you captured the rose in feeling and stature.
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Date: 3/6/2023 3:20:00 PM
Enchanting Margarita. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 8:52:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/19/2023 11:00:00 PM
Wow, I really enjoyed this poem, lovely!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/20/2023 3:44:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/19/2023 4:10:00 PM
This is an excellent personification Maggie. Good luck but it reads like a winner to me.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/19/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/19/2023 2:53:00 PM
Great entry. I've been stumped with this contest!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/19/2023 3:31:00 PM
Indeed! My head has been buried in my hands! Good on you producing good poems for both :)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/19/2023 3:29:00 PM
Tell me about it:) then try Cats Society;)))

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