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~ a muse of golden brown a beautiful dark etched love my sisters, my brothers fly free in this day so vivid a clear path pushing toward completion a unity.... solidarity.... shall we dance a sub-Saharan prance collective rhythms, a shuffle step a long time coming this freedom bright colors adorn overflowing spirit of love....... so grand , so free grab hold of my hand together we shall prove common! ~

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Date: 7/1/2010 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in Adeleke Adeite's contest "Africans Attutude" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2010 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Rick. ...if only...maybe one day, but it saddens me that it will not be in my lifetime..Sometimes, I feel that time is running out for Mother Africa, you know? Peace, audrey
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Date: 6/30/2010 3:42:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your winning poem in Adeleke's contest on Africa.. with this wonderful write and win ..so now enjoy the fruits of your poetic labour.. my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on my new cell phone with internet thankxxx very much.. what inventions ...luv..
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:50:00 PM
Your an AMAZING Poet and Writer!
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:22:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem. Good luck in the contest. -Mike
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:12:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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