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My problem is – I am selfish: I want to read and comment on other poems But my time in front of the PC is limited And my fingers and mind would rather Create their own poems and post them Before the demands of being a husband, Father and employee tear me away from The precious few moments spent by myself. So, I force myself to open and read a poem And I am met with words, sentences and thoughts That I cannot comprehend. Is that the sign of a poorly written poem? Or, just verification that I am less in tune to What today’s poetry entails than the artist that posted This piece. Skip it. No Comment. Read the next. But time is running out – and I have a thought of my own For a brand new poem – which won’t be read by others And receive no comments itself. I know a comment written will result in a comment received; And yet, … Okay read another. The word is “you’re” not “your”! You mean “than” not “then”! You should have said “their” not “there”! I cannot see the thought, the rhyme, the intelligence Because I am blinded by the mistakes. Do I tell them? Will they take it as help or criticism? Skip it. No Comment. Move on. Okay, I’ll write one of my own. “Yes, Dear – I know, I will give him a bath in a minute.” Try one more. Hey this is good. I like it. 32 Comments already received. What more can I say? They don’t need one more comment from me. Skip it. No Comment. “Okay, Okay, I’m coming.” Shut down. ENTER. Log off. ENTER

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Date: 4/5/2017 8:31:00 PM
This sums it all up pretty well!
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:27:00 PM
Wonderful entry Joe in HG's contest. I personally would have placed this higher. Many congratulations on your fine win in the contest >> James
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Date: 11/9/2010 9:18:00 AM
lol, good entry Joe, I also get choked at "your and you're" and "there and their" and all the other things that should have been learned in grade school. congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 11/9/2010 9:08:00 AM
Perfect look at the subject and real life..congrats Joe.BG
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's Contest Joe. Carol
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:51:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your HM in HG's contest on comments and views my friend.. a wonderfully written entry expressing so much of the things we all feel luv.. the dialogue is super... enjoy a special honor all your own today with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:22:00 AM
hmmm, a true presentation of many of our realities! Light & Love
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Book: Shattered Sighs