Coming of Age

The water rippled and folded smoothly as it entered the first delicate slope down to the lagoon. The rocks, slick and ebony black, shining in the moonlight. Laughing can be heard, above the bubbling sonata echoing through a hollow log as water dropped from ferns and forest primeval. Teasing, her tongue slightly brushed his in hurried anticipation, her soft young body changing from that of a child, but still more advanced than the young prince. He had not filled out as his father hoped and already puberty rites were late. He hoped for the growth spurt that would let him be called a young man. The young prince was not concerned. He planned to rule wisely instead of with a heavy hand. He entered the water above the big rock. Going limp and floating as a disjointed piece of hemp rope, he loved to glide over and around the slick rocks as the current lazily carried him downstream. He slowly entered the lagoon, fireflies and moon beams dancing on the water. She was waiting with a smile. They made love and the only sounds were theirs, falling on no one else’s ears. Their world was perfect in that one moment in time, and space, and pleasure. Strange- - -he no longer felt like a child. © Jun 1 2011 Charles Henderson For Rambling’s Rippling Stream contest.
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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:38 AM
oh. free verse becomes you, charles.. stunning! ... big congrats with smiles! huggs:) nette
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June 6, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Beautiful imagery and such a romantic write, Charles. Once you fall in love, you transcend from childhood. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Charles
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:57 AM
This is excellent Charles..Congrats on your win.
Mannan Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:52 AM
This is so beautiful and enchanting. many congrats for this win.
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:23 PM
Congratulations Charles on your win in my contest with this stunning poem~
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:57 PM
beautiful poetic mood, charles.. my special congrats! :) hugggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:44 PM
Congrats Charles on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this splendid entry luv.. enjoy..
Guzzi Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 5:56 PM
wowser Constance should love this! Very very good charles, dreamY! [best you take Carolyn skinny dipping this summer!]Light & Love
Nutter Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 3:08 AM
Excellent write, Coming of Age had me hooked from beginning to end. You show a lot of talent mt ffriend. http://anthonynutter.weebly.com/
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