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Coming Back Home

Coming back home might not be what I would hope Once I get there, I’ll need to open a faded envelope, Making explanations for the actions of my youth I will discover anew my abandoned bitter truth; Now that time has separated my years of strife Giving me in maturity, another glimpse at my life. Because I am no longer who I was back then, And nothing is as it might have been years ago, when Childhood morphed into wayward youth, and shame Killed all my hopes for a life free of guilt and blame. Home to unravel the origins of those shattered years, Only to confront a youth caressed by mindless fears; My opportunity, as well, to make some crucial amends Especially, to renew broken ties with forgotten friends. THIRD PLACE WINNER February 9, 2021 Submitted to “Coming Back Home” Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 3/8/2021 8:31:00 AM
Milton, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/8/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Constance. Your note means a lot to me!
Date: 3/7/2021 1:12:00 PM
Hi L. Milton, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis. I appreciate your congrats!
Date: 3/7/2021 12:09:00 PM
Hey L Milton, nice job on the write, congrats on a nice win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2021 12:11:00 PM
Thanks, John. I enjoyed writing for the contest. Acrostics are generally not my thing, but this one was fun and challenging!
Date: 2/9/2021 1:33:00 AM
"Renew broken ties with forgotten friends" Been there done that. Beautiful
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/9/2021 9:14:00 AM
Yep. I think most people can relate to this piece.

Book: Shattered Sighs