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5-7-5-7-7 Glorious vessel Spirit resides as faith grows Glory shines as light in the eyes, that's willingly Molded by the potters hands For the sanctuary/T(h)anka contest ***Kindred spirits, house the comforter Won ninth place in the contest sponsored by Chris Aetner!!

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Date: 10/7/2010 8:30:00 AM
lovely tanka, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/7/2010 5:20:00 AM
A beautiful write Doris and an awesome win.. Congratulations :) Wilma
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations Doris on your worthy poem's top ten win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/6/2010 3:35:00 PM
Congrats Doria on your win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry.. great piece luv .. enjoyed as u enjoy your win my friend with luv...
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Date: 10/6/2010 3:00:00 PM
Great tanka for the comforter, dear Doris. Congratulations in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/6/2010 1:02:00 PM
Many congratulations Doris on your win in Chris's contest with this fine Tanka >> James
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Date: 10/6/2010 11:14:00 AM
Very worthy entry and congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/6/2010 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Doris in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2010 7:12:00 AM
ninth place yeah!!
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Doris
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Date: 10/6/2010 4:17:00 AM
Congrats Doris on this inspiring tanka :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/6/2010 2:04:00 AM
enjoyed this poem Doris, congrats for your placements in contest. Harry
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:45:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem Doris, and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 9/23/2010 8:11:00 AM
A lovely poem about the comfort and sanctuary you have found through your faith, Doris. Best wishes in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 7:29:00 AM
Your poem is absolutely amazing too. Thanks for the kind comments.
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:40:00 AM
This is a beautiful entry for Chris' contest Doris.. Good luck to you ;) Wilma
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:59:00 AM
Awesome Sentanka, Doris. Harry is right, 5 in the first line! Wish you good look in the contest!...Gert
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:17:00 PM
beautiful, good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:53:00 PM
love this Doris, looks like 5 on the first line to me. Harry
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:05:00 PM
It's nice but the first line only has 4 syllables.
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Date: 9/22/2010 6:56:00 PM
Good work Doris. I see you stuck with the 5,7,5,7,7 form. Very nice. Love, Joyce
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