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Comfort

In the corner of the field the hay is stacked , looking like gold ingots for the winter king. The geese are gleaning among the stubble, so intent on feeding they scarcely notice the raucous crows that argue over head. Soon the birds will leave for warmer climes. The bales will fill some farmers barn and the land will lay in wait for signs of spring. For now though, the soft warmth of fall bathes the path. and paints the geese with gold. With thoughts of the beauty before me.. I wander toward home and the comfort I find there each time I climb the familiar steps to my front door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/1/2010 6:04:00 AM
the geese are gleaning among the stubble ... and paints the geese with gold ... gosh, so very, very beautiful, my dearest friend
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Barbara. Enjoy! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:59:00 AM
Dear LNC, Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:38:00 AM
Comfort does have a unique way of pleasant enjoyment Barbara, thanks and Congratulations in honoring my contest, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Barbara
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congrats BG on your big win in John's contest with these lovely words so poignant.. enjoy sweet success this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:51:00 PM
I love the scene you have painted with your artist's brush, Barbara....this is wonderful, and puts the loveliness in my mind's eye. Nicely done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/21/2010 4:23:00 PM
Appreciation of the seasons and comforts in life is sometimes hard for us to muster, LNC. But you sure brought a sense of comfort my way in this beautiful poem. Wonderful fall imagery throughout your write! Love, Carolyn
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