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Come With Me

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Let’s not waste a moment longer There’s so much of the world to see There’s so much of life to taste There are hills to conquer Winds to ride Sunrays to pluck Clouds to touch Seas to sail Lands to see Stars to catch Meadows to run Come Let’s start our fantasy An ecstacy Our own AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on February 23, 2018 for contest FREE VERSE ON LOVE sponsored by LAURA LOO - RANKED 2ND

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/5/2018 5:09:00 AM

My thoughts as I play with my young grandson. It doesn't take much to entertain him, just attention. The backyard is his theater, gymnasium and dance hall. Excellent, Line. PS: Kudos on your placement.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2018 9:23:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Reason. Much appreciated.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/28/2018 6:23:00 PM

I loved this simple, passionate, poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/28/2018 7:05:00 PM

Thank you, Sunlite. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/27/2018 1:18:00 AM

A superb piece Line! Congratulations on your second placement! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/27/2018 7:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/26/2018 11:35:00 AM

---And more trophies to win! Congrats on your trophy winner, Line! As always, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/26/2018 11:37:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon. Much appreciated support LOL.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/26/2018 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Line. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/26/2018 11:37:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated.

Lu Loo

Date: 2/26/2018 5:41:00 AM

starting your own fantasy is the only thing we can do in love...you write of such love and romance. So much said in such few words sweet lady! thank you and congrats : )-luloo

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/26/2018 9:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Laura. Most appreciated. Your poem was a lot of fun. Line xx

Lauren Anne

Date: 2/25/2018 1:11:00 PM

"Sunrays to pluck" ... what a pretty image!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/25/2018 1:17:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment, Lauren.