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Comb Over

Z Z Top and Cousin It took the right approach Dark sun glasses and beards detract from scraggly hair Next time my motley hairdo meets with reproach Combing forward I’ll consider, sparing the Nair *For Rick's "Bad Hair Day" contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/28/2011 1:04:00 PM

Z Z Top one of my brothers fav bands LOL congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 4:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/28/2011 2:58:00 AM

Congrat's on your big win, Carolyn Lainie

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/27/2011 10:24:00 PM

LOL! I love ZZ Top! You can write music to this, Carolyn. I loved reading this fun poem. Congratulations on your WIN in Rick's "Bad Hair Day" contest. Best wishes, Kory

Ray Dillard

Date: 1/27/2011 7:49:00 PM

Any poem with Z Z Top mentioned is a winner. Congratulations on your win in the contest. RAY

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/27/2011 7:49:00 PM

haha. Many congratulations for this HM.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 7:47:00 PM

sparing the nair, what a fun line. I sure remember Nair from junior high. Congrats on the HM, Carolyn. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/27/2011 6:55:00 PM

cute one , congrats on your win in the contest Carolyn

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/27/2011 6:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest...Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2011 6:38:00 PM

Congratyulations on the HM win in the contest of Rick, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/27/2011 6:33:00 PM

Funny one Carolyn. congratulations on yor win. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet

Date: 1/27/2011 5:46:00 PM

Congratulations Carolyn on your HM win in this contest--enjoyed your poem--Thanks for clearing my doubt over the Quatrain form--kashinath

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2011 7:44:00 AM

Ohh that Nair was awfull! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/21/2011 4:34:00 AM

I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Carolyn. The best to you in ^Rick's contest. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/19/2011 9:24:00 PM

lol! Good one Carolyn, Lainie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/19/2011 12:50:00 PM

Funny! Good luck in the contest.

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 2:20:00 PM

ZZ are a brilliant Southern Rocking Boogie band. It's ironic that the drummer is called Frank Beard. Good luck in the contest Carolyn....:)

Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/13/2011 4:43:00 PM

LOL! Good luck in the contest!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/13/2011 1:39:00 PM

HA-HA-HA-HA funny I entered to but not sure if I done it right....Thank you so much for being there and being a good friend to me and I really love to see your comments.~Luv~Teresa

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/12/2011 9:07:00 PM

Oh beware a windy day, very well penned this witty piece. Harry

James Peranteau

Date: 1/12/2011 4:38:00 PM

Great use of this form dear Carolyn ! And what a witty thought dear poet ! You and Debbie must have teamed up wif dah funnys today ! Loved it Carolyn, much love, james

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/12/2011 3:10:00 PM

nairy a better bad hair entry have i read as of yet, Carolyn.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/12/2011 2:13:00 PM

I wish I had some hair to comb over. A few scraggly hairs that I try to keep out of my ears. Enjoyed mucho. I would love to visit, but at present I'm trying to save up enough money to visit my son in sunny California. Thanks for the invite. Love, Dave

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/12/2011 12:32:00 PM

what a laughing " hair loss" gas, carolyn... your sense of humor floors me.. best luck in the contest! :) nette