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Colours of Love

through vibrant trees bursting with rich pink blooms gently falling on the burning aura of the young loves, with sweating hands which gleam as they held hands......they walked slowly back, with mindful steps indented in the go!den sand. green stains off the grass sullied her dress, not caring the girl smiled in bliss, red swollen lips after their romantic interlude where his fine hint of a beard had rubbed, whilst they kissed his eyes twinkling blue with merriment which matched the sky, the burning sun, with it's psychedelic hue looked on. penned 8 June 2016

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Date: 6/10/2016 8:15:00 PM
Yes, steamy colors of love, Seren. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2016 6:59:00 PM
Congrats! Steamy. :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 5:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:48:00 PM
Lustfully done I like the twinkling blue with merriment which matched the sky. Well done
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:21:00 PM
Lovely imagery here,Seren!Very beautifully written!
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Date: 6/8/2016 1:19:00 PM
Rich in color, well done Seren. Best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 6/7/2016 11:35:00 PM
very romantic Seren good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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