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Colours In the Sky

QUOTE BY CHARLES MESSINA 
"Two doves in white flying, feathers glow beneath the morning's rainbow colours" 

Counting colours in you
Not so clear sky of blue
Until the greyness spoils the view,
And the prism of forming rainbows just grew,
Then from under the archway two doves of white flew.

 © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Peter Rees Date: 2/15/2023 1:15:00 AM Enjoyed your imagery very much , especially the appearance of the doves in the last line. Well done. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/11/2022 9:00:00 AM Your imagery is delightful Harry, Sorry I have been scarce but time is a limited commodity - I hope you are well and wish you and your lovely family the peace of Christmas tide, the joyfulness of laughter and that 2023 brings whatever dreams you wish for to fruition . Hugs and blessings dear friend, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Ann Peck Date: 12/11/2022 8:29:00 AM I like how you brought the two white doves into your poem. Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 12/10/2022 5:42:00 PM The imagery in this is exceptionally beautiful. I can't pick a favorite line really but the last two lines bring home the visuals. Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 12/10/2022 8:22:00 AM Hello hh. This is lovely and yes poetic in every way. I loved the title and how you incorporated it into a beautiful love. For all lovers may the colors be countless. Thank you for sharing your talent. May this day find you well. Blessings always. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/7/2022 1:09:00 PM A real Gem, harry. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/6/2022 6:57:00 AM I see occasionally in the spring and summer some ring-necked doves here that are almost white, and they are beautiful. I enjoy hearing their calls, the whirr of their wings, and the beauty they bring. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 12/5/2022 11:31:00 AM Harry, lovely images are conjuring beautiful thought as I read your lines! Beautiful!! Happy Monday ! Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 12/5/2022 8:45:00 AM Quite clever, harry ! I see the doves emerging from under the greying sky. Enjoyed this lovely ditty in monorhyme ! Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 12/5/2022 8:15:00 AM Lovely images, harry. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/5/2022 5:46:00 AM Lovely imagery you painted. Superb ending line, Harry. Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 12/5/2022 2:36:00 AM Yes Harry, I totally agree with Sunshine, you have formed a beautiful picture in the minds of your readers. Well done Harry Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2022 2:02:00 AM - A beautiful sight, Harry :) - hugs Login to Reply