Notes About The Poem

While stationed with the US Army at the Presidio of Monterey, California, I often supervised funeral details for old veterans.

Colours

The detail lowered the colors:
That weathered flag with stripes and stars,
That had crossed so many borders
In declared and undeclared wars.

Young soldiers debark for glories.
The detail lowered the colors.
Old survivors tell their stories
Of comrades who died in valor.

We refused to doubt their honors,
Though causes have been disputed.
The detail lowered the colors,
While veterans were saluted.

To the widows, kind words were said.
The rifle squads rendered honors,
Then respectfully Taps were played.
The detail lowered the colors.


20140625.  Note--'colors' means not only shades and tints of frequencies of light, but also refers to to a national flag in a military formation.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Seal Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 6:48 AM
Hi, Mark as promised i have started to read your poetry. I intend to read more and i must say i thought this was an excellent choice you gave for me to start.Very well written and thought provoking. George Seal..
Halliday Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Stoner Jr Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Enjoined your work, not surprised you won honors. Thanks from a Vet
Halliday Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 3:05 PM
You're welcome from a Vet. Never shot anyone, but spent time in the Balkans and Iraq/Kuwait.
A. Sharma Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 10:31 PM
A fabulous write Mark ! Congrats on top honours !
Halliday Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Belated thanks Dr. Sharma.
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 8:36 PM
this was an excellent one to go along with the holidays of Flag Day and fourth of July. GREAT win. Congratulations.
Halliday Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 3:07 PM
Belated thanks. Liked doing this one.
Hamilton Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 5:25 PM
yes Mark trooping the colours loved your take excellent poem congrats on 1st place ty for taking part hugs
Halliday Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Belated thanks.
Kiser Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Wow, now that hits hard, but it's honest.
Halliday Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 3:08 PM
Belated thanks. I was on the firing lines for a few veterans' funerals back when I was in the Army.
Gorelick Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 10:00 AM
outstanding..youve got a winner here. BG
Halliday Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Even though I occasionally like to draw with pastels and colored pencils, as a 20-year Army veteran 'colors' to me means an American flag with a gold border around it.
Halliday Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Thanks. Will have to find another quatern contest.
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