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Colourfication

Refreshing my attitude with a second amber shaded concoction, I made my conversational way through the proportionately correct number of jet and ivory faces this party required. This intuitively reminded me of why I hate parties. My sojourn took me into the garden for a delightful reprieve from the silver stodginess of the homes interior and its guests. Strolling its path, lined with lilac and ginger scented emerald flora, I happened onto the most mesmerizing soft sapphire eyes I have yet to have dreamt existed. The soft carnation color of her dress was in sharp contrast to the crimson coursing through my veins. I suddenly found reason to know why I love a good party... Colourfication Contest 03/12/2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2016 12:12:00 AM

Charlie, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/28/2016 1:01:00 AM

Thank you Linda, I've missed you at the Soup. It's not the same without your offerings. Love, Charlie

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/22/2016 8:38:00 PM

Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read Charlie, well done....Vlad.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/22/2016 8:45:00 PM

Thanks Vlad, not too high a rank but it was fun..

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/16/2016 5:00:00 PM

You have a unique voice here, subtle and keeps me intrigued ... love how your thoughts traveled from "hate" to "love" ... the right pretty face can change any man's mood. "proportionately correct number of black and white faces" ... I take it it was a PC party, with no one wanting to offend or discriminate? Sounds like today's world.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2016 5:28:00 PM

Thanks for the read Timothy. On the money with your observations. Let's chat again...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/13/2016 2:11:00 PM

A truly engaging piece! Well expressed.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/13/2016 2:42:00 PM

Thanks for your encouraging words Richard

Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2016 4:45:00 PM

Charlie, I adore this poem, you told a beautiful story woven with colour, this is a winner for sure, and I am loving it 7 ++ ~

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/12/2016 4:59:00 PM

You are too kind. It was a fun write. Maybe too light to place. So many beautiful entries. Your comments are prize enough. Thanks, Charlie

Timothy Barry

Date: 3/12/2016 12:21:00 PM

Love the color

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/12/2016 12:44:00 PM

Thanks Tom, probably not colorful enough to compete in the contest, but fun just the same.