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HexSonnetta
The HexSonnetta, created by Andrea Dietrich, consists of two six-line stanzas and a finishing rhyming couplet with the following set of rules: Six syllables per line,
Rhyme Scheme: a/bb/aa/b c/dd/cc/d ee

Nature spills colored ink upon flowers in bloom, a peacock's blue-green plume cottony clouds of pink and the waters we drink; creation's Her playroom. Earth's sky is sapphire blue, its seas, aquamarine, its forests jungle green, and gems in every hue. I've named only a few, but color inks each scene. Earth's a colorful place against the black of space.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 11:12:00 PM

Emile, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like your image too, Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2023 8:25:00 AM

Thanks, Constance; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 7:36:00 AM

Belated congratulations on this lovely and colorful write my friend. I was swept away by its beauty. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/5/2023 10:30:00 AM

Thanks so much Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/1/2023 11:02:00 AM

Marvelous, simply marvelous, Emile. Picturesque in the best poetic sense of the word with wonderful, fresh imagery. You do justice to Andera's form! Blessings my friend. PS - as slowly savoring your books! Treasures of poetry! Thank you again!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2023 2:29:00 PM

Thanks, Sam, I appreciate hearing from you, and thanks for letting me know you are enjoying my books, my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2023 10:54:00 AM

- Lovely poem, Emile :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2023 11:01:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise, I appreciate hearing from you, my friend, Emile.