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Colorful or Chimera Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 08/28/23

Colorful vegetables are so good for you Colorful dining when served cordon bleu Colorful melons, I just love honeydew Colorful candies that I love to chew Colorful cocktails I’ll sip one or two Colorful rainbows so pretty to view Colourful skin inking, it’s called a tattoo Colorful steam train, I hear it choo choo Colorful language – the air can turn blue!

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Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 11:17:00 PM

Jan, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, great image too, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 9:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What creative/fun ~ write/picture. Love It... Have a great day.............

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/30/2023 11:00:00 AM

You haven’t lost your touch.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2023 1:44:00 PM

aww you are so sweet, thanks Rick. I do write the odd serious poem but prefer humour any day:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2023 11:54:00 AM

- Really colorful and great, Jan :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2023 1:43:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M

Date: 8/28/2023 11:54:00 PM

Absolutely love this Jan…especially the last line!! Hehe…..and the picture is amazing! Debx

Deb M
Date: 8/29/2023 3:19:00 AM

Absolutely amazing picture Jan! Debx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2023 1:23:00 AM

The last line was my first thought Deb lol, (Typical Jan) lol. Isn't that pic amazing, I keep staring at it when I get a comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/28/2023 6:35:00 PM

Colorful language. Ooh, risque! :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2023 1:21:00 AM

thanks GW lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 8/28/2023 2:29:00 PM

So much colour… who knew? Enjoyed this Jan. Good luck in the contest. Terry

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2023 3:28:00 PM

Thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/28/2023 1:07:00 PM

Some great monorhyme going on here Jan, very effective and quite striking too, you always save the best one for last, way to go, all the best in contest, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2023 3:27:00 PM

Thanks David, it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/28/2023 12:27:00 PM

Ha! Great ending, Jan! Good luck in the contest…

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2023 3:27:00 PM

lol you know me well Ilene, in fact i worked from the bottom line upwards lol:-) -) hugs Jan xx

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/28/2023 11:05:00 AM

This is so great. I love how it looks on the page. This must have taken a lot to do Jan. Thanks

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2023 3:26:00 PM

thanks so much jeff:-) hugs Jan xx