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Collecting Seashells

I lie on the edge of the tidal pool trying to find a pretty shell. The face reflected back at me is a face I know so well. You lie on the other side of the pool grumbling, as you usually do. Helping me search for treasures, a summer pastime for me and you. The water ripples, our faces distort, a perfect shell you've found. I see your smile as the water settles. Neither of us makes a sound. Seashells forgotten, we lie on our backs on the rocks that surround the pools. Not as young as those faces in the water. Just a silly, old pair of fools.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/1/2011 5:58:00 PM
not so old, perhaps be bold, when spring time comes again, fowls of feathers sometimes flap, on a bird it can depend:) lovely "hm" 4 me i see longside our carolyn, thank u muchly babe, from the poncey sometimes slave... poor old bugger , Don
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Date: 6/25/2011 11:23:00 AM
Your lovely verse portrays a perfect afternoon.
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Date: 6/25/2011 11:23:00 AM
Your lovely verse portrays a perfect afternoon.
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:16:00 AM
Good one..If for the reflecion contest, good luck ..It reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2011 6:40:00 PM
Not so silly. I still have shells from trips to Va. Beach and Myrtle Beach. Fondest memories are of the ocean. Vince
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Date: 6/22/2011 5:55:00 PM
Isn't it great the way the water reflects a younger version of yourself, Francine? Maybe when I visit we can find some seashells too. This is the perfect pasttime for summer, Francine! Also an excellent entry for the mirror language contest. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/19/2011 8:57:00 PM
This one .... floats. As sweet and refreshing as gelato on a hot day. :-) If this is for a contest, you should do well. If this isn't for a contest, well, someone should sponsor a contest on seashells so I can see your name at the top. Smiles from Cyndi
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Date: 6/19/2011 8:50:00 PM
Just as pretty and descriptive as your previous entries, Francine
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