Coconuts

All of you Parrotheads covered with oil
And feathers, and signs, and pins
— Jimmy Buffett (Margaritaville)

COCONUTS

Coconuts are bosom buddies
for some Parrotheads. The
twin cups (A, B, C, Double D)
pair up nicely with a grass skirt.
Margaritaville twines with
party swines. (if your in Oahu) 

Coconuts can’t be breached
by hand. Skewer two,
for me and my love,
and slide in a straw.

Don’t let coconuts fall.
They can knock you out,
or revive your senses.
Especially true, when
your surrounded by
an army of ‘nuts,
on a tropical isle.

Drink them in! Palm trees
swaying, danger lurking,
especially on Gilligan’s Island.

I confess, I’m crazy
for coconuts. Don’t get me started
with coconut - cocktails, or flakes,
or shakes, on cake…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Elliott Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Hi Kim, if this is for the contest my very best wishes with this grand and humorous poem. Have an inspirational week. ~
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Thank you! You as well! Blessings!
Maul Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:35 PM
I like this very much
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Thank you :)
Fowler Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Ahh. The list goes on and on...teehee. Love it! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:49 AM
It does! It does!
Hind Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:38 PM
I loved this, Kim! You're down to earth. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, Paige! I sure do appreciate you!
George Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 9:05 PM
"Don’t let coconuts fall. They can knock you out, or revive your senses."..... A blunt truth humorously stated. For us loving in tropical areas, coconut is a heaven sent nut ! We use coconut oil for fries and in many curries. Tender coconut with the water inside is delicious. Beautiful poem, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Sounds delicious!
Anaya Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:16 AM
a cornucopia of coconut pleasures, Kim! I think the hula lady would make a great Halloween costume. Jimmy Buffet RIP. xo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 2:59 PM
The Parrotheads go all out! Thank you, Anaya!
Spilchuk Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Farewell Jimmy Buffet, "all of those tourists covered with oil." Humorous poem enjoyable to read. Nice post.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 10:14 AM
I saw the Parrotheads once upon a time…lol! It was on a cruise…they go all out!
Bell Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Use to love banging a nail into a coconut and drinking it, the taste was to die for. Probably why I love bounty bars.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 10:15 AM
I agree. Me and my brother bought them on an island. I’m sure Islanders drink it all the time. It was a treat drinking right from the coconut!
DiMino Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 6:51 AM
My wife and I love coconut ice bars. Just one is seldom satisfying enough. Like halved coconuts. Love it! Fun read. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Fun! Fun! Fun! Blessings!
Brotherton Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 12:27 PM
I think there shall never be a more pleasant ode to coconuts. Well done Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Thanks so much, Jerry!
Buehler Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Your coconut poem is so fun and enjoyable, Kim. Lovely writing! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Thank you!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:55 PM
A smile--and then some--paid in full my hula girl! Aloha Kim, from Hilo on the unmistakable Big Isle, Mahalo, William
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Aloha, William! :) Smiles!
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