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Cock-A-Doodle-Doo Day After Day

Life’s not all fun and games, no sir - even war games under the waxing sun. Cock-a-doodle-doo day after day as the ground gives way to waves. And we wave goodbye, have another cry, blame the other guy, don’t even try to figure out the way to God’s heart. After all, your god, is a god of war. Whatever side you’re on, you figure he’s on your side too. Zap that chap, have no mercy. The nails had no mercy. The thorns had no mercy. Christ’s blood soaked the soil. We till and toil, we live, we die - day after day.

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Date: 11/5/2023 6:34:00 PM
"Whatever side you're on, you figure he's on your side too." The is the conundrum...So nicely done Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2023 9:21:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 11/3/2023 9:54:00 PM
I say what I Am Anaya said. Live long in the Lord, my friends, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 11/3/2023 3:49:00 PM
..."Day by day Oh Dear Lord Three things I pray To see thee more clearly Love thee more dearly Follow thee more nearly" Love you KIM!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2023 10:45:00 AM
I always loved that song! Amen!
Date: 11/2/2023 7:17:00 PM
I like the way the title works with the message of your poem, Kim. ~ Rooster McConaughey
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2023 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 11/2/2023 5:58:00 AM
Your profound message resonates throughout, Kim. And we wave goodbye, have another cry, blame the other guy, don’t even try---sadly, so true!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2023 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay and for sharing what you liked and yes, most profoundly sadly…
Date: 11/2/2023 5:45:00 AM
Creative work in line with what is going on today in our world and worlds far across the sea. I am saddened to see what is happening and know there is nothing I can do to change it. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2023 7:20:00 PM
I know what you mean…we can pray. Be blessed, dear Sara!
Date: 11/2/2023 3:16:00 AM
I thought this was a fun poem, it certainly is not. I have as yet to write a poem on war, but you have done wonders with yours. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2023 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. So many things going on around the world. Hugs

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