Cobalt Summer

Down there, on the shell-coarse beach in a furnace of sand The sea writhed and almost boiled at the shore, Barefoot we walked, with her hand in my hand No girl had ever driven me more. She dry-licked her cherry lips and saltily smiled, Solar flares bursting there in my chest, The way she moved always drove me wild, My eyes entranced by her shape in that dress. The sun stamped in the sky like a chromium plate, Dripped the colours of butter and steel, And she stood there the most, the coolest hot date, So radiant and still and surreal. When she threw back her head as she lay on the grass Liquid eyes burning silver and green, With the parting of lips she gave me a free pass And the world dissolved to aquamarine.
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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 7:36 PM
this poem oozes sensuality, Tony. I am here at the bequest of frank Herreira(Probably spelling it wrong) who told me I should look you up. YOu must be one of his greatest favs ever on this poetrysite. I am new here and I bet you are a great writer if the majority of your poems are like this one. HOpe you can write again soon. I know how it feels to be out of the loop! andrea
George   Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 2:57 AM
Written as only you can. MAGNIFICENT! Tony. Congratulations on your win. Elaine
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October 15, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Tony, congratulations on being one of the winners in the Poetry Soup contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 3:38 AM
Very descriptive and passionate. Keep writing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:26 AM
Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 3:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Tony. Love,Carol
Fish Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:21 PM
><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><
Fish Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:18 PM
><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><
Pate Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in the finals. Beautifully written and sizzling hot.
Sheart Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:30 PM
Hi Tony, Just wanted to wish you congratulations for your winning poem in the finals!! I'm so happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia
Moreno Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Tony, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 11:32 PM
Hi, Tony! Congratulations on your first round win. I love the way you express your emotions. You are a romantic at heart. Best wishes and continued success. Warm Regards, Andrew.
George   Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 5:53 PM
Nice to see you here, dear Tony. Best wishes through to the next round. Elaine
Sheart Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 1:50 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Tony. Love, Carol
Adeite Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 7:48 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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August 26, 2009 at 6:30 AM
beautiful poem - congratulatons on your feature. Krista
Rider Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
Peranteau Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 8:12 AM
Tony,..this poem really is filled with artistic qualities,..I loved it !!! congratulations on its feature this week ! james
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tony. Love, Carol
Doggett Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 5:38 PM
Great rhyme, with great expressions, Bill
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June 13, 2009 at 12:36 AM
Very vivid words forecasting the perfect imagery in your mind. Such a wonderful poem with strong vocab. and creativity.
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June 9, 2009 at 2:00 AM
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April 28, 2009 at 1:16 PM
******Wooooow! Very nice poem.^^^^^^ Ernilando
Caliri Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Musta been a pretty cool summer...nice job!
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