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Cloudy, Cloudy Night

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cloudy night softens the vibrant colors of day to soft pastel hues hues awaken soul allowing it to dwell in serene, soft comfort

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/23/2023 3:35:00 AM

Good Morning Sara. Hi. The format is true including voice and tone. Your moment has much imagery and beauty. You executed poetic expressions. The early morning hours before dawn has much life and shades. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings and Peace always. (smile) PS - The hues do awaken the soul I agree.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/23/2023 3:03:00 PM

Hi Lisa & thanks for stopping by. I agree, the early morning hours have much life and shade. (You said that so poetically.) I appreciate your insights and kind comments. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Mat Ignacio

Date: 10/21/2023 10:20:00 PM

A delicate ballad of light and hope.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 4:29:00 AM

thank you for your kind comments. Have a pleasant Sunday! Sara

Stephan McBride

Date: 10/21/2023 6:54:00 PM

Wow, this a beautiful picture and tranquility felt throughout your poem to enhance its appearance: )

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 4:31:00 AM

thank you, Stephan, for your thoughtful comments. Have a lovely Sunday, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2023 3:00:00 PM

this is very pretty. Love the picture too.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 3:33:00 PM

thanks, dear Andrea, for your visit and for your thoughtful comments. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 10/21/2023 12:52:00 PM

Another gem from the Haiku Queen. Your talent is limitless. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:35:00 PM

thank you, Karen, for stopping by and for your wonderful comments about my Haikus. I do like them. Have a pleasant Saturday, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/21/2023 12:22:00 PM

Dear Sara, your haiku is like a divine melody that resonates with my very being, lifting my spirits to new heights. Your choice of words is a masterpiece, delicately woven together with an artistic touch that captivates the essence of poetry. Each syllable dances gracefully in my mind, casting a radiant glow upon my soul and infusing my day with an enchanting brilliance. Blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:38:00 PM

thank you, kind Sotto, for your visit and for your uplifting comments. I'm grateful it had a positive impact on your spirit today. :-) I like that each syllable danced gracefully in your mind. I'm delighted my Haiku impacted you so positively. Your words definitely brighten my heart and spirit. Enjoy your Saturday, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/21/2023 12:11:00 PM

I love that opening line in your haiku, cloudy night softens… and soft pastel hues. Your haiku always makes my soul warm, and brightens up my day or night , as your words flow so smoothly and in such graceful manner that touches readers soul so very effortlessly! Loved reading this

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:40:00 PM

thanks, kind Ink, for your beautiful comments. I'm grateful my Haikus brighten your day/night. I appreciate knowing they flow effortlessly...those words mean a great deal to me. Thanks for stopping by again today. I'm grateful for your visit. Have a pleasant Saturday, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/21/2023 11:04:00 AM

We should not take that restful time for granted. God did not give us the light of electricity but one of the sun and muted light of the moon. Delightful, Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:41:00 PM

I agree...I think we all are guilting of not resting. Like so many things, the light of electricity has both a positive and negative use. It's up to us to find balance. Thanks for stopping by and for commenting, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/21/2023 9:57:00 AM

Cloudy night, soft drizzle I love to sit out in, seeing the glow of moon in the shadowy mix. Of course, in Phoenix everything cool is a treat. But there is fine mystery in weather, somehow our souls akin to such vicissitude. Lovely read!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:43:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Joe. I, too, live to sit outside and watch the moon dance with the sky. Yes, there's a mystery in the weather...well said! Our souls gravitate to the changes perhaps not knowing why. Thanks for your kind comments. Enjoy your Saturday, Sara

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 9:42:00 AM

The choice of words are excellent as always.. Both haiku have their own unique imagery... you excel at these..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:46:00 PM

thanks, Silent One, for your visit and for your accolades for my Haiku-writing ability...means a great deal to me. For some reason I like the brevity, sensitivity, and message Haikus can deliver. Have a splendid Saturday, Sara

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/21/2023 9:34:00 AM

Dear Sara, what a truly heavenly, uplifting Haiku this is from your creative heart. Love your artistically, poetically carefully chosen words, ‘ hues awaken soul’ So delightful. Inspiring. So tranquil. I love this and adding it to my fav’s so I can read and enjoy it often. Hope you are both having a peaceful weekend. Hugs and smiles to you both. :):)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:48:00 PM

thanks, Christina, for your lovely and positive comments about my Haiku. I'm grateful you found it delightful, inspiring and tranquil. What an honor! Thanks, too, for faving it. I appreciate you and your comments. You have a peaceful weekend as well. Bill says 'hi.' hugs, Sara

Mark Hughes

Date: 10/21/2023 9:05:00 AM

There you go Sara, being terrific again, love the pictures you select also!!!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:48:00 PM

ahhh, thank you Mark for your remarks...you made me smile. I'm grateful for your comments and your continued support. Have a wonderful Saturday, Sara