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Clouded Heart

~ Here on an evening of clear skies and bright moonbeams I find your heart filled with clouds as mine breaks trying to bring some light into yours ~

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Heidi Sands

Date: 12/28/2019 6:14:00 PM

This person is lucky to have you as a friend to care so much to bring light into the cloudy heart :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2019 8:46:00 AM

Your kindness is always appreciated Heidi.

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 12/28/2019 6:11:00 PM

You shine a light on everyone with your poetry Chris. Wonderfully penned...hope all is well. Ron :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2019 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Ron. I am glad you liked this.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/27/2019 10:12:00 AM

You know melancholy gets me every time this one...got me good! Nice but sad write!

Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2019 8:45:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2019 6:11:00 PM

aww may you bright light into their dark moments with your wonderful words Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 12/27/2019 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Jan. It is so nice to see you again.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/26/2019 5:51:00 PM

Sorry someone you know is filled with sadness. I hope your kind words help push their clouds away ... goodnight Chris

Chris Green
Date: 12/27/2019 6:45:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kind thoughts.