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Cloud Soldiers

A legion of clouds, March across blue battlefields: War rumbles ahead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/3/2010 11:43:00 AM
Another terrific Haiku, no surprise there. Raul, you see much more through your eyes than many poets I know. And when you do, I can visualize your mind working like a projector in the background. Outcome, incredible short form poetry >> James
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:12:00 PM
this is a definite Oklahoma visual... very nice!!!!!
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:45:00 AM
As Barbara said,your highness. .those marching clouds impress. .Charma
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Date: 5/17/2010 12:56:00 AM
Again, your highness..you rock. BG
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