Cloud Soldiers

A legion of clouds,
March across blue battlefields:
War rumbles ahead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 3, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Another terrific Haiku, no surprise there. Raul, you see much more through your eyes than many poets I know. And when you do, I can visualize your mind working like a projector in the background. Outcome, incredible short form poetry >> James
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May 18, 2010 at 12:12 PM
this is a definite Oklahoma visual... very nice!!!!!
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May 17, 2010 at 5:45 AM
As Barbara said,your highness. .those marching clouds impress. .Charma
Gorelick Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 12:56 AM
Again, your highness..you rock. BG
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