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Cloud Castles

Castle made of clouds, A white cumulous palace; Kingdom in the sky.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/24/2009 11:07:00 AM

This is an eye opener. When i was young i would always look up at the sky and make out shapes, i love this Raul, it brought me back, James

Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 10:23:00 AM

Awesome write my friend. this one is an ode to the kingdoms in the sky.

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 2:08:00 AM

KIngdom in the sky, beautiful line.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:47:00 PM

The imagery is spectacular. marvelous...

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 11:02:00 PM

This is a masterpiece. The idea is nice and the flow is there too. Nice job. Tyler

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/18/2009 7:08:00 AM

Hello Raul it's me again. Ernilando. You are a master of Haiku. I love it, Ernilando

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/16/2009 7:41:00 PM

THAT WAS WOUDERFUL POEM, KEEP WRITING YOU DO GOOD WORK....................DANIELLE

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/14/2009 10:46:00 PM

I think this is so beautiful, I can see the magic.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/14/2009 4:31:00 PM

Lovely Raul..good work. BG

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/14/2009 11:04:00 AM

masterful --full of vision

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/14/2009 7:42:00 AM

This is an amazing Haiku, it actually beckons the reader to stop and take a moment to appreciate the beauty of nature at its best. I love those massive towers of clouds, they truly create a "Kingdom in the sky". You paint such a vivid picture. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/14/2009 7:23:00 AM

Makes me want to go outside right now and look myself. Think I will. So beautiful. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/14/2009 1:58:00 AM

What a gloriously, peaceful place that sounds like, I wish to find it one day. :) Love, Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/14/2009 12:08:00 AM

Dear Raul, Bravo another great haiku I've missed reading YOUR POETIC TALENT YOURS ALWAYS...HG