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Cloud Castles

Castle made of clouds,
A white cumulous palace;
Kingdom in the sky.

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James Fraser

May 24, 2009 at 11:07 AM

This is an eye opener. When i was young i would always look up at the sky and make out shapes, i love this Raul, it brought me back, James

Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:23 AM

Awesome write my friend. this one is an ode to the kingdoms in the sky.

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 2:08 AM

KIngdom in the sky, beautiful line.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:47 PM

The imagery is spectacular. marvelous...

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 11:02 PM

This is a masterpiece. The idea is nice and the flow is there too. Nice job. Tyler

Ernilando Tugaff

March 18, 2009 at 7:08 AM

Hello Raul it's me again. Ernilando. You are a master of Haiku. I love it, Ernilando

Danielle Moreno

March 16, 2009 at 7:41 PM

THAT WAS WOUDERFUL POEM, KEEP WRITING YOU DO GOOD WORK....................DANIELLE

Laurie Ginn

March 14, 2009 at 10:46 PM

I think this is so beautiful, I can see the magic.

Barbara Gorelick

March 14, 2009 at 4:31 PM

Lovely Raul..good work. BG

Frank F. Atanacio

March 14, 2009 at 11:04 AM

masterful --full of vision

Lena Townsend

March 14, 2009 at 7:42 AM

This is an amazing Haiku, it actually beckons the reader to stop and take a moment to appreciate the beauty of nature at its best. I love those massive towers of clouds, they truly create a "Kingdom in the sky". You paint such a vivid picture. Smiles from Lolita