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Hay is crinkling in various places The candle stump stares solemnly Beyond the moon nocturnal vault A groan floats in the air, rewon by gag words. The trees climbed the hill and over it Golden light shone via withered stalks of the fields Form a truss around haphazardly spread items A gray stone protrusion anchored in the soil. You can grasp soft light before it turns into fire Embrace the dawn limbs that wish not to leave Wigwag with guttural grunts and groans A song is famous for mixing notes. When the moon lights up the forest Insight vibrates with comfort and grace Shadows provide healing and nightly perks After teasing, stars micturate dreams to reality Crossing the dense green is bliss. Stamina allows for both movement and rest The meadow cures you with brightness Clearing in the woods is a mainstay. 4th place contest winner Written: February 10, 2023 The Clearing Poetry Contest Sponsored by: craig cornish

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Date: 2/26/2023 7:57:00 PM
An array of striking images. Great poem. Congratulations on your win.... dear friend.
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:39:00 AM
there are some beautiful lines in this poem and good use of alliteration - congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 2/25/2023 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful images and imageries are brought in to bring the theme home. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2023 10:29:00 AM
"You can grasp soft light before it before it turns into fire." beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Lasaad!
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Date: 2/25/2023 7:14:00 AM
Lovely imagery and laced with your well-chosen words Lasaad. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 2/12/2023 1:22:00 PM
Fine imagery that you have articulated, Lasaad, and an intriguing take on Craig's contest, all my best, Aloha, William
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Date: 2/11/2023 11:42:00 AM
Interesting lines penned for Craig's contest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Very descriptive are your lines. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2023 2:53:00 AM
One could quote many lines from your poem. A masterpiece.
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Date: 2/10/2023 11:47:00 PM
Deep and insightful, Sotti:) lovely use of original words:)
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Date: 2/10/2023 3:02:00 PM
When the moon lights up the forest Insight vibrates with comfort and grace--well said, my friend. Beautiful insights throughout. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/10/2023 2:45:00 PM
Very beautiful clearing poem! Well written :)
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Date: 2/10/2023 1:21:00 PM
- Woow ... excellent written, Las :) - "A groan floats in the air, rewon by gag words" ... "Stamina allows for both movement and rest" ... - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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