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Clearing Metaphors

Hay is crinkling in various places
The candle stump stares solemnly
Beyond the moon nocturnal vault
A groan floats in the air, rewon by gag words.

The trees climbed the hill and over it
Golden light shone via withered stalks of the fields
Form a truss around haphazardly spread items
A gray stone protrusion anchored in the soil.

You can grasp soft light before it turns into fire
Embrace the dawn limbs that wish not to leave
Wigwag with guttural grunts and groans
A song is famous for mixing notes.
 
When the moon lights up the forest
Insight vibrates with comfort and grace
Shadows provide healing and nightly perks
After teasing, stars micturate dreams to reality
Crossing the dense green is bliss.

Stamina allows for both movement and rest
The meadow cures you with brightness
Clearing in the woods is a mainstay.

4th place contest winner

Written: February 10, 2023

The Clearing Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: craig cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 7:57 PM
An array of striking images. Great poem. Congratulations on your win.... dear friend.
Puddifoot Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 8:39 AM
there are some beautiful lines in this poem and good use of alliteration - congrats on your win in the contest!
Alex Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful images and imageries are brought in to bring the theme home. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 10:29 AM
"You can grasp soft light before it before it turns into fire." beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Lasaad!
Fowler Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Lovely imagery and laced with your well-chosen words Lasaad. Congratulations on your win. :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Fine imagery that you have articulated, Lasaad, and an intriguing take on Craig's contest, all my best, Aloha, William
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Interesting lines penned for Craig's contest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Very descriptive are your lines. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 2:53 AM
One could quote many lines from your poem. A masterpiece.
Daniel Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 11:47 PM
Deep and insightful, Sotti:) lovely use of original words:)
Pandit Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 3:02 PM
When the moon lights up the forest Insight vibrates with comfort and grace--well said, my friend. Beautiful insights throughout. Best to you, Lasaad.
Sands Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Very beautiful clearing poem! Well written :)
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 1:21 PM
- Woow ... excellent written, Las :) - "A groan floats in the air, rewon by gag words" ... "Stamina allows for both movement and rest" ... - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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