Circle

If there ever was the perfect form the circle wins of course You and I stand all alone in the center of our universe While over us, the autumn sky is newly washed by rain The circle of the harvest moon drips flawlessly tonight.... While amber moonlight wraps us in a circle drenched with light ________________________________________ For Brian Strands Contest: #234

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Sandra Haight

Date: 11/7/2016 9:20:00 AM

Such lovely imagery of the 'circle' from the endless rotation of the universe to the small moonlit 'circle' from the harvest moon cast on tiny earth. Beautifully written, Carrie, and congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Thompson

Date: 11/6/2016 10:12:00 PM

Lovely flow and expression, a 7 in my book. Very well done. Congratulations on your trophy win.

Elaine George

Date: 11/6/2016 9:26:00 PM

How utterly beautiful, Carrie. Many congrats on your first place win. Lainey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2011 8:50:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 3:45:00 PM

CONGRATS CARRIE ON THIRD PLACE WITH THIS AMAZING POETRY LUV..SO HONORED TO SHARE WITH U ..

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/13/2011 10:17:00 AM

A very nice piece. Congratulations Carrie

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/13/2011 9:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2011 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Six Lines Of Poetry, Please" contest Carrie. Love,Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2011 5:44:00 PM

Beautiful, Just a beautiful write Carrie! I love the concept of the circle being perfect! Very well thought out and written!!! And the last line...perfect!! Great work!! Good luck in the contest...should do well!!

Wole Francis

Date: 9/11/2011 4:50:00 PM

nicely written.