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Image result for pictures of people sitting on a park bench in the christmas season

I sit here with the company of my reindeer Trying to think of how to bring holiday cheer But mainly I ponder, the hate all around No gift can change this in the silence of sound I am known to bring happiness and joy I am a symbol of giving children a toy But, how do I make the difference in need Of attention, in this world filled with greed? I sit here in peace that I hope people will find Before I take my ride to leave things behind But, my hope is that all will change next year When I return for my visit with my reindeer So, I sit on this bench making wishes now Hoping the gift of love will spread somehow Heidi Sands PHOTO # 3 12/10/18 Placed 1st in The park bench at Christmas contest.

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Date: 12/19/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thanks for your very emotive and expressive winning work entered in my contest. If each of us would do something for one person this Christmas it could make a difference in at least a few. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara. I agree with you. I appreciate the opportunity to be in your contest :)
Date: 12/16/2018 11:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 12/12/2018 1:34:00 PM
"ask and you shall receive"... such a splendid gift you have shared with us, heidi... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2018 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Nette. Hugs :)
Date: 12/12/2018 12:58:00 PM
Such a thoughtfully beautiful poem
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Mike :) I appreciate your visit and comment. I hope all is well!
Date: 12/12/2018 12:44:00 PM
- I think it's more important with love than expensive sparkling gifts ... a lovely poem, Heidi :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2018 12:46:00 PM
Yes it is. Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/11/2018 2:47:00 PM
Such a wonderful wish expressed lovingly in your wonderful poem Heidi. This a terrific entry for the contest Good Luck xxoo Happy Tuesday !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Mike. :) Happy Tuesday :)
Date: 12/11/2018 9:54:00 AM
I think I'll sit on the bench with him and hope, too. Enjoyed it, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2018 10:11:00 AM
Me too. Thank you Sunlite :)
Date: 12/11/2018 8:45:00 AM
"Hoping the gift of love will spread somehow" Great prayer-wish. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Beata. I appreciate your kind comment. Bless you :)
Date: 12/11/2018 7:28:00 AM
Awesome message..lovely sentiments. You chose a wonderful messenger to convey your thoughts, Heidi..who better than Santa can mend the ills? Very well done. My very best for a well deserved win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay! Have a nice day :) (I noticed a typo , the word give is supposed to be gift in the last line:))
Date: 12/11/2018 7:06:00 AM
Heidi, your witty words express a genuinely sweet sentiment. And I'm certainly with Santa on that last great line. Best wishes in Sara's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/11/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Carolyn :) Actually, I noticed a typo in the last line, Give is supposed to be Gift .
Date: 12/10/2018 7:25:00 PM
I love thinking of Santa not just delivering presents willy nilly but wanting to rid the world of greed. What a terrific idea! This is fantastic, Heidi! Love it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren :)
Date: 12/10/2018 7:06:00 PM
Santa is pondering...a little rest not bad...a lot of children waiting...time to... HO HO HO...sky crossing by sleight...Sweet Christmas wishing...All the best
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2018 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. :)
Date: 12/10/2018 6:12:00 PM
Beautiful write Heidi..best wishes in the contest..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate all your support :)

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