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A co-write with Jack Horne and Broken Wings.

Published  in Whispers, poetry journal, November 2015.

We walked through Whitleigh, early one winter evening, many moons ago with the sounds of the Salvation Army Band: a carol service near the shops and I asked if we could stop. We joined the jolly carollers and sang Star of Wonder, the lyrics on a large screen, for those who didn't know them. A dreary December night, but I recall feeling wonderfully warm: it seemed to start inside and spread, filling my heart with happiness, as I held my parents hands, we only sang that one song, for we were going to gran's but I still smile at my memories, of a child's first carol service .... and wonder who else remembers. The snow is falling outside my window, pretty delicate snowflakes, it is another Christmas Eve, and I want to decorate the tree, I got the tattered box from the basement that holds the decorations. Within are all the memories of Christmas pasts, and in my mind, I can still see all the happiness of yesterdays; I see my sweet mother cooking and fussing about the house, and I am helping father with the Christmas tree, and gran is supervising from her rocking chair. I touch each old decoration like the finest of lace and weep, weep for the three angels ... that dwell above. ________________________ November 14, 2015 Free Verse Submitted to the contest, Must Be Read, sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 11/25/2015 9:44:00 PM
A sweet reflective write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 7:40:00 AM
Kim, thanks so much for visiting and the congrats ~
Date: 11/24/2015 2:54:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2015 5:38:00 PM
Skat thanks for the wonderful, the love, and the congratulations ~
Date: 11/21/2015 6:34:00 PM
Great poem my friend and a superb free verse. Congrats on your fine win!!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 6:48:00 PM
Robert thanks for visiting and the congratulations ~
Date: 11/16/2015 5:53:00 PM
Profound message of Christmas memories, Constance. Jack is a wonder. It looks almost as if one person wrote the whole thing. Which part is yours? I was thinking the second half? Awesome!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 11:00:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks for visiting, yes I am the second part, we wanted to write a happy Christmas and a sad Christmas, this poem is to be published in a poetry online journal soon.

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