Notes About The Poem

A co-write with Jack Horne and Broken Wings.

Published  in Whispers, poetry journal, November 2015.

Christmas Memories


We walked through Whitleigh, early one winter evening,
many moons ago with the sounds of the Salvation Army Band:
a carol service near the shops and I asked if we could stop.
We joined the jolly carollers and sang Star of Wonder,
the lyrics on a large screen, for those who didn't know them.
A dreary December night, but I recall feeling wonderfully warm: 
it seemed to start inside and spread, filling my heart with happiness,
as I held my parents hands, we only sang that one song,
for we were going to gran's but I still smile at my memories,
of a child's first carol service .... and wonder who else remembers.

The snow is falling outside my window, pretty delicate snowflakes,
it is another Christmas Eve, and I want to decorate the tree,
I got the tattered box from the basement that holds the decorations.
Within are all the memories of Christmas pasts,
and in my mind, I can still see all the happiness of yesterdays;
I see my sweet mother cooking and fussing about the house,
and I am helping father with the Christmas tree,
and gran is supervising from her rocking chair.
I touch each old decoration like the finest of lace and weep,
weep for the three angels ... that dwell above.

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November 14, 2015

Free Verse

Submitted to the contest, Must Be Read, sponsor, Silent One

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 9:44 PM
A sweet reflective write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
La France Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Kim, thanks so much for visiting and the congrats ~
A  Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:54 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
La France Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Skat thanks for the wonderful, the love, and the congratulations ~
Lindley Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Great poem my friend and a superb free verse. Congrats on your fine win!!
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Robert thanks for visiting and the congratulations ~
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Profound message of Christmas memories, Constance. Jack is a wonder. It looks almost as if one person wrote the whole thing. Which part is yours? I was thinking the second half? Awesome!
La France Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks for visiting, yes I am the second part, we wanted to write a happy Christmas and a sad Christmas, this poem is to be published in a poetry online journal soon.
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