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I did not choose my life, I was born into it; The lonely little girl was my path to follow. Did I wish to bury a baby and a husband? Life is full of paths and we must face them. But I have made choices, yes I have. When mother was sick, I was there for her, I gave up my life to help until the end; Everything I could do, I did for my mother, The only thing I could not do, is die for her. I stood by her coffin, and I was proud. The choice I have made with my poetry is clear, From the very depth of my soul with a dripping pen; I keep memories of my beloved alive, The beloved live in my poems, in my gossamer lines. Oh, some think my writing is melancholy. I made a decision to change, to go back to school, Leaving a good job to follow a childhood dream; It was hard, very difficult, but I did it, Now I am a nurse in palliative care, that was my choice. I help the dying elderly die with dignity. And my life and beliefs are all my own, mine alone, I will not allow anyone to try to control me ever; This existence is too short to be a puppet dangling, And today, my choice is silence and tranquility at home. The clicking clock of life ticks until the end. __________________________ September 7, 2015 Verse For the contest, The Choices We Make In Life, sponsor, Edward Ebbs First Place

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Date: 9/15/2015 7:26:00 AM
BW this flows from heart and is felt all the way here down under. In awe, truly well written. Congrats a many
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Date: 9/14/2015 12:43:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations in Edward Ebb's contest. SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:25:00 AM
Broken Wings, this is just a perfect write of choices! God forbid, if true, the choices have carved out an emphatetic and humane person! Admirable! Love Balveen
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Date: 9/12/2015 3:33:00 PM
This is incredibly moving Broken Wings - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2015 12:16:00 PM
congrats on your win
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Date: 9/12/2015 9:59:00 AM
Wonderful win a 7+++++! Everytime I read your poems I learn a little more about you the closerer you come to my heart love Eve
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Date: 9/12/2015 9:11:00 AM
Stopping back to congratulate you on your well-deserved 1st Place win for this lovely poem about your choices, Broken!
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:27:00 AM
BW, Congratulations your 1st place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:11:00 AM
Great win. Very memorable.
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Date: 9/12/2015 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, I had three responses while reading this poem, first I felt sad and then admiration for the strength shown, third joy for the humanity shown
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Date: 9/12/2015 5:07:00 AM
Very touching Broken Wings loved your write. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/12/2015 4:59:00 AM
Back again with big congrats on ur first place win broken with this awesome write!
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Date: 9/11/2015 11:44:00 PM
Thank you for your entry Broken and congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/9/2015 1:13:00 PM
Such wonderful, unselfish choices you made, Broken Wings. I admire how strong you are with all you've been through. Your work as a nurse in the field you chose must be so difficult, but can only be accomplished by a person with a giving heart like yours. All the best in the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/8/2015 3:59:00 PM
being a nurse is a calling just like the ministry. And I believe that choosing to follow our calling is a path that God set's us apon. It may seem like your choice but it's mostly His will.
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:41:00 AM
"I did not choose my life, I was born into it" Well said and brilliant write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:46:00 AM
The choice we make in life determine where we would be... You make your choice wisely BW. A times when we are in despair we lose our ways because then our memories have reduced which might lead to wrong choice, but I'm glad for HE leads your ways. A well and brilliant write. Good luck in the contest.........A.M.
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:15:00 AM
It is great to work in a field of helping others deal with illnesses. My wife is an RN and she has shared some heart warming stories. Helping humanity is very rewarding, but sometimes we loose these special people who we are helping. I'm sure it can be difficult at times. Love this write. I applaud your profession.
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Date: 9/8/2015 1:12:00 AM
Hello Broken Wings... choices are the result of where we stand today even though some of the choices were made by others. I totally agree with you; writing poetry about our life keeps memories alive - thank you Broken Wings - Lindsay
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:52:00 AM
Wonderful write, great to know about your selfless attitude broken! Of course a super seven!But I personally feel whatever we call choice is a destiny after all! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/7/2015 7:15:00 PM
You made some excellent choices. good luck in the contest.
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