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Chocolate Blues

Ive got the chocolate blues tonight It is completely driving me mad I hear chocolate shouting my name l want it soooo bad I can smell it , l can taste it So velvety and sweet My mind and body are craving it I want , no l “need” it to eat But alas , l cannot indulge tonight As l am carrying years of chocolate overload One more piece in this precious temple It will erupt and explode!

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/8/2023 3:24:00 PM

I can relate to this all too well, Deb. (and I have diabetes) Great Poem.XX

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:45:00 AM

You're A woman after my own heart Shirley…..Chocolate Addicts hehe! Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 11/8/2023 11:17:00 AM

I’ve got the answer for you, Deb. Get that chocolate that is packed solid with whole nuts, cos nuts is good and healthy and there’s less chocolate to make you feel guilty. See… I’m not just a pretty face. Hope you said, ‘To hell with it’ and indulged cos a little of what you fancy does you good… and I’m not referring to your pool guy!

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:43:00 AM

Thats the problem Terry…its never a little ….its all or nothing…..and that applies to my gardener…..tired of the pool guy sacked him!! Haha….Debx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/8/2023 8:58:00 AM

This is absolutely delightfully delicious, Deb! Oh, how I can sympathize with you. And, even when I think I can have just "a wee bit of Heaven, I find I can't stop and one taste is never enough! I think that is called an obsession! This is so well written and so much fun! Many thanks for sharing this delectable poem! Off to raid my chocolate chip stash! Blessings!

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:40:00 AM

Haha hope you enjoyed your snack!! Obsession sounds about right Sam! Ha……Cheers….Debx

Charles Messina

Date: 11/8/2023 12:22:00 AM

Oh Deb, stop it...just eat it (lol). Hershey's, Reece's, Snickers and Chocolate Kisses. There ya go...now if that doesn't give you the urge maybe a glass of chocolate milk or hot cocoa will do the trick. (lol) A very "Sweet" write! Love this! Charliex

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:38:00 AM

Youre naughty Charlie….an enabler and feeder l think haha!!! Cheers …Debx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/7/2023 5:26:00 PM

Never craved sweets much. Give me that bacon double cheeseburger and fries! Seriously, chocolate (dark) is healthy - in moderation, of course! Buona mangia!

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:37:00 AM

Hehe l don't mind a burger either! Dark choccy….I think not L.O!! Cheers….Debx

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/7/2023 3:02:00 PM

I am confident that indulging in a few pieces would have no adverse effects on your well-being. Your words have brought immense joy to me. Unfortunately, my diabetes restricts me from enjoying such indulgence.

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2023 2:36:00 AM

My problem is its not just a few pieces Lasaad hehe! Thankyou my friend….Debx

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/7/2023 11:21:00 AM

Dear Deb - you’re sweet enough my lovely but I’m sure a few pieces wouldn’t hurt you!! Reading this, you have put a big smile on my face especially the last two lines. My problem is carbs, carbs, carbs in the shape of potatoes in any form!! Think I would like to join you at Willy Wonkers ( one of my favourite films) Thank you for the smiles tonight. Hugs and smiles my poetic friend xx

Deb M
Date: 11/7/2023 12:40:00 PM

Hi Christina….thankyou for such a gracious comment my friend! I am so glad it made you smile…..dont get me started on spuds Christina….chips, roasted, mashed…..anything Yummo! I will ring Willy Wonkers tomorrow and book us both in….will let you know when haha!!! Debx

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/4/2023 8:24:00 PM

Eat it! It will only make you sweeter:) A fun one indeed young lady:)

Deb M
Date: 11/5/2023 2:30:00 PM

There you are!! Sweeter and larger that's me hehe!! I think l need to go to choccy rehab at Willy Wonkers! HaHa….Always a pleasure Daniel….now come back !! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/4/2023 2:38:00 PM

I can so relate, Deb. I'm a chocoholic for sure. I have to limit my chocolate intake, otherwise it stays on my thighs. Nicely done. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Deb M
Date: 11/5/2023 2:28:00 PM

I understand that Sara…limiting my chocolate intake is a struggle for sure…..needs dedication and l lack that in the choccy department! Thankyou..lDebx

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2023 7:27:00 AM

nooo just give in Deb, as a woman i know when you need chocolate you NEED it lol hugs Jan xx

Deb M
Date: 11/5/2023 2:26:00 PM

Hi Jan….l always give in but its toooooo much! Moderation is the name of the game ….thats what l need to learn….will l ??….ummm probably not hehe!! Thanks lovely Jan….Debx

Lin Lane

Date: 11/4/2023 5:38:00 AM

Oh Deb, no you won’t explode! Come on over to Aces. I’ve got some chocolate croissants ready to come out of the oven and fresh coffee brewin’. You have time to sit a spell with me and catch up on what Sheriff Koplin was talking about in his Milton Creek poem. Did you read it?

Deb M
Date: 11/5/2023 2:24:00 PM

Hey Lin….yes l just read both Marks and Toms poem….both great, fun tales…l do enjoy the Milton Creek sagas for sure! Thanks always…Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 11/4/2023 5:33:00 AM

Lol! Same! Im trying to cut down my chocolate intake and not listen to the chocolate cravings singing in my brain haha! But oh dear how i crave! This resonates so strongly with me gosh im smiling! Faving this

Deb M
Date: 11/5/2023 2:22:00 PM

Another Fave IE…l will be getting a big head haha!! I appreciate a fave greatly as l never expect poets to fave my poetry….but when they do lt gives me such nudge of confidence and encouragement! Debx