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Like many poets before, I have tried all which-way not to measure love – not to price love~ Like a post office puts sentiment to a ruler meters jewelry purchased, already with the weight of grief -- a romantically stricken heart; a summarily discarded lover, hoping to re-awaken a former partner’s fond participation, given chance for another poke at the fond lip, desirable pressure on the fond hip Large teddy bears and cards also weighed and measured before ship -- for occasions missed, when wife, lover, child, having been sore-fully neglected therefore get rightfully pissed Even Nature, our Mother, greenly tempts, colorfully invests: her seasonal erections of flushing, blushing, gushing scenting blossoms, to entice passionate play naked torsos tingling, mingling, aromatic redden complexions, sharing conjugal hyper confections titillating beaches along winding capes surfboard fanatics attempting copulating acrobatics -- could man be little more than Nature’s sophisticated, prancing, bathing, basking swimming, back-paddling, saturated zoo-like apes? Does God purchase love with fear of hell, therefore man treasures love like a market placing calls on highs and lows winners to shows nose-bleeds for pressured ups while cushions for the fearful falls -- keeping players awake nights for rosy to ripe the tremulous trigger the purring calls?

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Date: 10/15/2023 2:13:00 PM
oh heck the chips are down with me from the start I've no chance as I'm not a good poet! lol:-) love your style Joe I particularly like "Does God purchase love with fear of hell, therefore man treasures love like a market placing calls on highs and lows winners to shows" makes me think of Led Zeppelin buying a stairway to heaven:-) hugs jan xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 5:05:00 PM
LoL: I don't know any good poets...all the ones I know depend heavily on the Grace of God:) Blessings my friend.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:53:00 AM
You have a way to make people think, as I can see from your comments.. You are an intelligent man and that is portrayed through your poetry... so much to digest and process here..
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Silent One
Date: 10/15/2023 7:44:00 AM
Oh children are like that, mine think I never went to university and studied to a very high level... oh well..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2023 7:38:00 AM
My children would say different:) Thank you, Si; your support, encouragement means a lot to me. Blessings.
Date: 10/14/2023 3:11:00 PM
Con't ... to Him through us ... His creation. There is nothing to fear but fear itself, as some have already said. I may not like it, but His Love is enough for me. I'd like to understand better, but I don't have to know any of the answers to know I submit to the will of my creator God. I should have soup mailed. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Joe. Bill
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/14/2023 4:12:00 PM
For sure, His Love enough and everything. I agree totally.
Date: 10/14/2023 3:08:00 PM
Very thought-provoking poetry, Joe. We all struggle with profound thoughts as we mature and evolve in our understanding of big questions like who and what is man, what happens after physical death, and why are we here in this physical body? To your thought, "Does God purchase love with fear of hell?" I'd answer, it is different for each of us. God didn't purchase my love with fear, He is Love, and is the only one or thing I can Love. His unconditional Love for His creation is reflected back
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/14/2023 4:09:00 PM
My opinion, good answer, Bill; that is true love you have, unshakable love -- anything that comes my way I have attracted, and God has allowed for my good or the greater good of humanity, which is one in the same. God has never let me down. That also means different things to different people. I serve through knowledge and ignorance. Knowing or unknowing -- it is all good. Whether health or sickness I try to find light and way. Blessings my friend.
Date: 10/14/2023 4:45:00 AM
Here you deal with some intriguing issues faced by mankind these days regarding love and sex. Marital sex has lost all its sancitity and sex has stooped to mere satisfaction of the physical needs of man and nothing more. I don't know if my interpretation is close to what you have meant. Your poems are too profound.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/14/2023 1:24:00 PM
Your explanation sits fine with me. I don't always know everything that is said, implied by my poetry -- maybe sometimes saying too much, confounding content and meaning. I think, you would agree, writers are forever students -- sometimes having to relearn in order to advance along their fondly chosen path.
Date: 10/13/2023 4:00:00 AM
God created hell because of fallen angels. Not for man. Anyone who goes to hell is his/her choice. Liked your poem though. Blessings.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/13/2023 10:54:00 AM
I agree totally, it is a fallacy propagated by surface reading of the bible and by priests who have a vested interest in keeping congregations fearful and supportive. Whether we go to hell, and how long we stay, is determined by our accepted evil portion -- those who totally reject the Christ will be put on a dark planet, with another type of evolution for redemption. The Heaven and earth that the awakened know, Christ's faithful, by then will be one..
Date: 10/12/2023 2:45:00 PM
fantastic metaphorical writing, Joe. Your poem presents some important issues and an important question--could man be little more. The issues you presented might just keep some of us awake at night :-) Seriously, great stuff. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/13/2023 11:14:00 AM
I know...a lot of what I write makes people uncomfortable -- I write, not to sow doubt but to test thus strengthen convictions, my own included, so I can spiritually meet the challenges to faith ill circumstance may present in the future. The present Liberal Progressive Administration in the USA is being manipulated by demons. Many of the sincere in the Democrat Party, and Deep State Republicans, do not know whom they serve. Some are profoundly aware...and just don't care. Thank you, Sara. Blessings.
Date: 10/12/2023 1:18:00 PM
Well, this one had a little bit of everything. Sex, religion, nature and even teddy bears. I'm ready to ante...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/13/2023 11:21:00 AM
The wheel turns...and all good poets are players. One must live fully if to write fully believable. Blessings my friend.
Date: 10/12/2023 12:58:00 PM
- We have a lot of chips to play with in life ... the chances of winning are 50/50 I would think ... excellent metaphorical writing, Joe :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/13/2023 11:24:00 AM
And if not, 50/50, we will make up the difference by sheer gusto. We die to the physical in all processes -- that no one gets away from. In my opinion anyway. All of which I write is from my perspective mostly, myself admittedly no authority on anything. Blessings my friend. Hope you are feeling better.

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