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Chill Out

Chill Out When you’re in an awful hurry And haven’t time to spare And everything’s a worry You’re rushing here and there While all the jobs are piling up Like dishes in the sink You haven’t time to wash a cup You haven’t time to think Stop... and smell the roses That well worn old cliché For sure as little apples Tomorrow is another day Brian's contest TOMORROW IS ANOTHER DAY in the an opening/closing line or anywhere within the poem or as its title , on any theme 27/2/2010

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Date: 3/5/2010 9:38:00 AM
I wish you luck in the contest, Margaret...Thnx for reading and leaving comments on my poems...I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me....Jimmy
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:49:00 AM
You did a great job with this poem! Good luck in the contest, I know you'll do well with this entry. -Mike
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:09:00 PM
Fun and witty. Good luck in the contest, Margaret.
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Date: 2/27/2010 1:02:00 PM
This is a great piece, really makes you stop and think, rhyming is also perfect. Regards: Déirdre
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Date: 2/27/2010 2:32:00 AM
Great one for the contest, good luck. shoulf be a winner!!
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Date: 2/27/2010 12:09:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Margaret.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:22:00 PM
Sure as little apples, this is going to be a winner. BG
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:02:00 PM
This made me smile.....It sounds like a day I'm familiar with! We would all be much happier if we would "chill out"!! Perfect title, by the way!! Good luck in the contest, Margaret! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/26/2010 6:56:00 PM
great take on the contest!!
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