Childhood Memories

"How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood"


Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842


my thoughts gathered like seashells on this sand
i watch this sun rise a bloodied red sphere
lifting from the sea, beneath it i stand

i am alone again, it's death i fear
yet i hear you whispering through this air
a mother's voice now tarries on my ear

i close my eyes just to see us all there
soft lonely whispers fall through ocean's sound
relentless like these moments we now share

as time waits for no one, so i have found
cherished are the seconds where you reside
in childhood memories that now astound


on the ocean's edge with you by my side
i feel a thunderous roar of my heart
wallowing over this pain that i hide

i open my eyes as you now depart
watching these gulls as their wings spread apart

november 22, 2020
Childhood Memories Contest
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Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:08 PM
A big big congratulations.. This is well deserved.
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Very nice write Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Y. Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 7:01 AM
Hi Sandra, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:48 AM
I see pain in your childhood memories. Congratulations on 1st place, Sandra!
La France Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 1:26 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this excellent and emotional poem _Constance
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:34 AM
wow thank you for the placement and your contest and help awakening my muse from her slumber.... hugs
Mcconnell Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 6:27 PM
A truly amazing piece Sandy, having nice rhyme and good flow too. Also with good imagery and expression too. Great to see you again, blessings and hugs, Gordon
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Thank you so much Gordon, my muse was sleeping, surprising to me she woke up and wrote two rhyming poems, she normally stumbles with rhyme... hugs and blessings
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 11:59 AM
Congrats on your top win, Sandra! You are special! your poems have a unique flavour to them!
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:36 AM
What a kind thing to say Krish... thank you so much... hugs
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 1:25 PM
A beautiful write from you Sandy, but then, that's what we've come to expect! (no pressure there eh!)
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Thank you John... my muse wrote an offering for your contest as well, as i now know you have seen :) hugs
Proxenos Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Breathtaking my dear friend - good luck in the contest! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer... hugs
Wolves Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 11:01 AM
Beautiful poem
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you... hugs
Wolf Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 8:27 PM
I find that the best memories are on the ocean -- they touch all five senses... Such a haunting write, Sandra. Beautiful poesy. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you Gershon... the ocean is my happy place :) hugs
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November 24, 2020 at 7:49 AM
Beautiful childhood memories Sandra, they’re always close to heart. Best wishes for the contest... Belle
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much Belle :)
Y. Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:42 AM
Hi Sandra, What a well-written sad nostalgic write.Best wishes in the contest. It's so good to see you posting again. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Alexis... my muse was sleeping... hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 2:49 AM
Such a joy to read, yet so sad beneath the lines... love the poem. Wishing you a win. God bless you
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Thank you so much Regina :) hugs
Green Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 2:58 PM
It is easy to see why you were so missed around here, your poetry is some of the best on the site. This as heart touching though a bit sad. But once again, so beautifully crafted. Best wishes my friend.
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:40 AM
What a sweet thing to say... i know you are missed around here as well... good to see you around... hugs
Gondolf Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:07 AM
A melancholy piece on childhood memories filled with much emotion. Beautifully written, Sandy, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Adams Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Thank you so much... hugs
Pandit Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 5:27 AM
These memories tug the heart--emotive and powerful as always, Sandy.
Adams Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Thank you so much Vijay... i struggle with rhyme but the theme helped my muse move the thoughts along... hugs
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November 22, 2020 at 11:11 PM
Fabulous poem, Sandra. I missed your poetry. Hope you are well. A poem that I am sure will rate high. ~~
Adams Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Thank you so much Constance pointed out her contest to me, and although my muse doesn't handle rhyme well i thought i would coax my muse to play... hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 6:36 PM
wow, gorgeous came to my mind and I looked down and saw Caren had used that same word. Well, it's TRUE!! Glad you visited me, so I could see your poem here today!
Adams Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Thank you so much Andrea...i was trying to visit as many of my friends as time allowed :) hugs
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November 22, 2020 at 3:49 PM
A gorgeous tribute to childhood.
Adams Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Thank you so much Caren... the shore is the only place i can go and relive my memories... i can see my family and recall the many trips there... hugs
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