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Childhood Dreams

Childhood dreams Magic wand of a fairy that granted, All my wishes to be treated as special, No school no books, only nature trips, Delicious foods games through noon endless sleep, Mother's affection was a reality, a fortune, Being her shadow and as talented a distant dream, Walked through the paradise in my dreams, Just to wake up with a flower in my hands, Had my soul been there? Dreams turned true?? All of them ??? Written August 25th, 2015 For contest by Silent one Missed to enter Entered for "Any poem#34 contest" by Linda Awarded 10th place win

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/13/2015 6:55:00 PM

The simplest things in life can be just as good as a dream come true... Congrats on a win with this heartfelt poem! Nicely written, Dr. Upma!

Lu Loo

Date: 11/3/2015 1:21:00 PM

A wonderful well deserved win! Congrats :) Be blessed -LU

Skat A

Date: 11/3/2015 12:40:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/2/2015 11:52:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/28/2015 12:24:00 AM

Dr. Upma, you may have missed the contest but you got yourself a winner in my book! No only in mines but everyone else that viewed this awesome write.:-)Alexis

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/27/2015 4:21:00 AM

this really is wow!!!!! meaningful Dr. Upma.. i sorry that you missed but surely us readers will not miss how beautiful is this!~Olive ELoisa

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 8/26/2015 1:39:00 AM

Dr. Upma, lovely poem with free flowing nostalgia, makes me miss childhood****blessing

Julia Ward

Date: 8/25/2015 11:57:00 PM

Lovely poem, but your votes are showing up as 3,161 which can't be right as it was only posted today... You might want to contact Soup about this error.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2015 8:23:00 PM

A delightful write, Upma! Sweet little girl dreams. Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2015 8:02:00 PM

sorry you missed the contest. A very nice memory and dreamy!

Steven Mossburg

Date: 8/25/2015 6:42:00 PM

Very beautiful. A joy to read.

David Brown

Date: 8/25/2015 4:13:00 PM

The third stanza is breathtaking....beautiful piece.

Constance La France

Date: 8/25/2015 2:23:00 PM

Upma, beautifully penned, a winner in my humble opinion 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, secret lover

Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/25/2015 1:08:00 PM

Excellent! Fun to read of idealic times in childhood. TWEAK: Not sure for comprehension on the line "and as talented" Not sure who is? Mom? The shadow, the dream? Unclear. FAVORITE LINE: "Mother's affection was reality,a fortune,"