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I flew to Chicago last Friday night my great uncle was turning a hundred. The plan was to fly-in Friday, party Saturday, and fly out Sunday. No missed school. The air felt colder in Chicago, the wind really bit, and the sun seemed to be at an odd angle. We stopped by the beach of a lake so large that there were waves breaking on the beach. The party was great. EVERYONE was there. But then there was the choreography of luck. I woke up sick Sunday morning - really sick - deathly sick, you know the drill, weak like my muscles were falling off my bones. At 8am Charles called - I should have met him. I couldn’t lift the phone - I poked the button. “I’m not going anywhere,” I told him before falling back asleep. KLUNK I heard my hotel room door open, it was Charles. He came in looking like he expected a threat. I could only open my eyes for a second. “I’ve GOT it,” I told him, (not knowing what ‘it’ was) “Get out, save yourself.” So went Sunday and Monday - I didn’t eat or drink. Charles canceled flights, extended hotel room bookings, and the car rental. Finally, Tuesday morning, he said, “I think you’d better try.” So somehow, we flew and we made it. There was a famous football player across the aisle from me He’s retired now, like all of my heroes - Brady, Manning. He played for the Ravens, I’d hated the ravens, I’d hated him, the way you hate someone just because they’re great but they play for the other team. I didn’t tell him, and sadly, I didn’t warn him that I might just throw up on him (I was masked). Charles bought me one of those horseshoe pillows and I passed out. Before I knew it I was back in the dorm. Being sick and helpless, away from the comforts of home is the worst. I’ll have to remember that - someday - If I’m a doctor.

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Date: 4/12/2024 5:11:00 PM
I’d still kiss you right on the mouth,(even if Charles was watching.) I seen a Dr. Pepper beverage yesterday and thought about you! =] Get well soon Chicky.
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Date: 4/11/2024 12:16:00 PM
A nasty bug Anais, but you held this story together so well, has the doctor in you narrowed ‘It’ down, wonder if anyone else at the party felt the same? The random thoughts going through your mind on the flight are priceless, nothing worse than feeling like one is actually dying, says it all, glad you’re on the mend, cheers David
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:19:00 PM
I’m thinking it was food poisoning - but I hate to think about it at all =]
Date: 4/11/2024 12:14:00 PM
Dear Anais, Your recounting of your trip to Chicago for your great uncle's hundredth birthday celebration was...poetic. I liked the descriptions of the cold air, the waves breaking on the beach, and the famous football player seated across the aisle painted a clear picture of your journey. Your honesty about falling ill and feeling helpless was felt by my heart. It's in those moments of vulnerability that we truly appreciate the comforts of home and the care of loved ones. Yes, you have a great potentiality to become a doctor someday if that is your passion. It shows a depth of understanding and empathy. This was a heartfelt narrative. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Daniel - you reviews make me want to keep writing =]
Date: 4/11/2024 2:11:00 AM
- Quite an experience ... sick when you should be having fun ... hope you are well - hugs
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Date: 4/11/2024 6:26:00 AM
Thanks, I’m better now - felt like I was dying though - at the time =]

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