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Cherry Ripe - Definitely Not For Contest

I popped my cherry
innocence...
a thing of the past

Inspired by Andrea's contest
6th August 2015

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Darren White

October 10, 2016 at 1:55 AM

It's good you know you popped it. We hate being in the dark, right?

Jan Allison

October 10, 2016 at 2:36 AM

I couldn't put this in the contest with it's subtle innuendo lol:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

October 10, 2015 at 2:20 PM

Looking back, I wish I'd popped it with who I have now. It would have meant the earth. Hey Ho! not to be, I'm incredibly happy that she's chosen me. Another lovely short piece Jan, so love reading you//hugs//James xx

Jan Allison

October 10, 2015 at 2:30 PM

You have the rest of your life to share with an amazing lady James - guess we all wish we could turn back time and events in our lives could have turned out so differently but life isn't like that is it my friend and we learn and move on:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

August 11, 2015 at 11:02 AM

it had to happen eventually....I just hope your experience was done sensuously....;)

Jan Allison

August 11, 2015 at 11:44 AM

LOL:-) hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

August 7, 2015 at 3:54 AM

Is there no limit to your naughtiness ninj Naj. Love it! You should have entered it Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

August 7, 2015 at 4:10 AM

You guys have me all wrong I am not naughty! hugs jan xx

Thomas Martin

August 6, 2015 at 6:24 PM

Well. . .

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 6:30 PM

.... I take it you are speechless at my creatvity lol :-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

August 6, 2015 at 6:17 PM

love it love it!!

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 6:19 PM

I didn't post it for the contest as I wasn't sure how you would react to my take on the theme - I have posted a more creative one for you - I hope you like it:-) hugs Jan xx

Debbie Guzzi

August 6, 2015 at 4:47 PM

hmmmmmm ;) Light & Love

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 4:49 PM

Thanks for dropping by Debbie - I did pen a proper poem for the contest :-) hugs jan xxx

Constance La France

August 6, 2015 at 4:31 PM

Jan, you silly naughty girl, you just could not resist that cherry pic and thanks for visiting my poem, all that I am. ..

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 4:44 PM

I wrote this poem first then thought I can't put it in Andrea's contest lol so penned another ... but I couldn't resist posting this one :-) hugs Jan xx

Etienne Lariviere

August 6, 2015 at 3:38 PM

tres naughty as we say!

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 4:11 PM

Nooo mon amie I am not naughty! hugs jan xxx

Etienne Lariviere

August 6, 2015 at 3:38 PM

oh la la !!!!!!!

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 4:11 PM

I see you like the poem so much you came back for another bite of the cherry lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

August 6, 2015 at 2:11 PM

Wow! Cherry ripe! A very unique take on this alluring visual...Andrea would have loved this one! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 2:13 PM

I thought it may be a bit risque Paul so posted the other poem for the contest.... BUT I couldn't let this one go to waste lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

August 6, 2015 at 1:48 PM

naughty you, jan... love this!.. huggs

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 1:51 PM

me naughty Nette ... no never! lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anna Hopper

August 6, 2015 at 1:12 PM

Jan! I have the perfect solution! You need to see hummingbirds and I need to see a small island! Let's do a house switch for a bit. Ya know, like the movie with Kate Winslet and Cam Diaz (sp?). Oh yeah, you will see lots of humming birds! I will put some sugar water in a red container on the porch. You can bird watch all day while I sit on the beach... On an island...where my heart and soul belong!

Anna Hopper

August 6, 2015 at 1:19 PM

Agh! I was hoping for a Caribbean island of some sort. Oh well, gave it a shot! Lol

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 1:14 PM

Sounds Idyllic Anna - trouble with the British weather and our little Island is you would need your thermal vest, wellies and umbrella .. days on the beach are few and far between summer has been pretty dire this year:-( Hugs jan xx