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Cherished is the night-20 titles

Cherished is the night-20 titles Cherished is the night, Whenever I see you smile, that's when I know The reason God created love You are my, Portrait of love, and, in my imagination, we are Dancing in the moonlight And so it begins, Love's sweet surrender... When love takes hold However, Within her eyes, there is, An emptiness inside... and she says, "You don't know me" "why can't you understand that, Some hearts can never be tamed" I reply... I'm always right here Now I'm, All alone this evening, and I see, Beyond the solitude... Just love remains. but, I can still hold you, For the last time, In my beautiful dream... If only I could love you For Richard Lamoureux contest 20 titles July 24,2019 Titles used: Cherished is the night-Son of Spock Whenever I see you smile- Cay Cay Jennings The reason God created love-Lu Loo Portrait of love-Winged warrior Dancing in the moonlight-Victor Buhagiar And so it begins -Nette Onclaud Love's sweet surrender- Alexis Y When love takes hold-Emile Pinet Within her eyes-Richard Lamoureux An emptiness inside-Brandy Nicole You don't know me-Charlie Smith Some hearts can never be tamed-Silent One I'm always right here-Laura Leiser All alone this evening-Chris Green Beyond the solitude-Sandra Adams Just love remains-Greg Bardon Can still hold you-James Inman For the last time-Susan Ashley In my beautiful dream-Andrea Dietrich If only I could love you-Becca Teagan

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Date: 8/9/2019 2:38:00 PM
wow so glad I read this today, I apologize for not reading it sooner. You made 20 titles turn into a beautiful poem of adoration and love. You never cease to amaze me. Good job and congrats :)-luloo... ps, thank you also for using one of my titles. be blessed :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/9/2019 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Laura glad you enjoyed it, I do appreciate your support.
Date: 8/3/2019 8:51:00 AM
You however were the Maestro!
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/3/2019 12:39:00 PM
Ok thanks Rick
Date: 8/2/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your second place win. One of the best John!
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2019 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Rick, I'm honored to have placed so high, it's really a collaborative effort...90percent others words!
Date: 8/2/2019 5:54:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your win John..
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, so nice of you to come by my way, always a pleasure!
Date: 8/1/2019 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations John, on this win. You have created a Masterpiece. ~ Brandy
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2019 8:49:00 AM
Wow...masterpiece, I am very pleased you like this one, thanks Brandy for your generous comment!
Date: 8/1/2019 6:44:00 PM
Great work John. Congrats on your 2nd place win. Regards...Charlie
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2019 9:10:00 PM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 8/1/2019 5:18:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, John. Well done.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2019 9:10:00 PM
Thanks Line
Date: 8/1/2019 3:30:00 PM
Nice contrasts pulling on the heart! Congratulations, John!
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Kim
Date: 8/1/2019 2:45:00 PM
Very well done John. Great choices and congratulations.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Janice
Date: 8/1/2019 1:18:00 PM
- What a wonderful writing, John :) - Congratulations on your 2nd place on the winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 8/1/2019 11:59:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations, i knew it would do rather well...hugs :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Sandy
Date: 7/28/2019 6:47:00 PM
This one flows so nicely...Excellent poem using the titles John...
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/28/2019 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Joseph nice of you to pass my way tonight!
Date: 7/28/2019 2:36:00 PM
This is touchingly beautiful John. Excellent write with a beautiful flow.
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/28/2019 2:40:00 PM
Thanks James for your nice visit. Did you notice your title was used?
Date: 7/27/2019 6:34:00 PM
lovely sentiments, john...so awed by the flow of your piece.. and how nice of you to use my title!... huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/28/2019 1:14:00 PM
Your poem is a beauty, had to use it, thanks for the nice comment!
Date: 7/27/2019 6:43:00 AM
You did this so well John, honoured you used my title.. had to look up the poem, as had forgotten what it was about!
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2019 7:50:00 AM
The privilege is mine dear poet
Date: 7/26/2019 10:34:00 AM
Wow this turned out beautiful John! I think it will do well in the contest! I am honored to see one of my titles in your poem :) hugs
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/26/2019 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Sandy, yours is a special one, that's why I chose it!
Date: 7/25/2019 10:43:00 PM
Wow, this turned out nice! I'm honored that one of my titles made it into your lovely poem.
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/26/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Becca, yours is one of my all time faves. Thanks for passing by my way!
Date: 7/25/2019 10:30:00 PM
When you are with someone and the emotions are strong- love is tugging deeply at the heart- yet, they don't feel the same way. It is very painful indeed. In these moments shared, but not shared. Your thoughts truly move me. You have placed these titles perfectly together my friend. ~ Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/26/2019 2:10:00 PM
You are welcome John. So kind of you to place one of my titles in this poem of yours. I am humbled. ~ Brandy
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/26/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much Brandy for your positive words, it certainly was a challenge, but I think it turned out pretty good!
Date: 7/25/2019 6:52:00 PM
You certainly did an admirable job. I read this more than once for you loaded it with layers of emotion that deserve discovery. It blows my wee mind that you were able to weave so much tangible feeling from 'fragments.' I think all who accomplished this task are already winners who should pat their own backs or let me! All the best in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2019 10:15:00 PM
Thanks again Cay Cay for making the rounds on my page tonight, I was feeling a little down and you made my night with this thoughtful comment, thanks again. JD
Date: 7/25/2019 9:28:00 AM
Honored to be part of your list Johnny boy...well crafted my friend...ready for a win...sending tissues lol...^WW^ :o)
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2019 9:37:00 AM
Great...hope you get more views. Thanks for the kind visit...pass the tissues please!
Date: 7/24/2019 5:51:00 PM
The poignant power of your golden pen is on full display in your sadly beautiful poem, John. A passionate tapestry of titles woven together with your elegant artistry. I’m honored that you chose one of my titles for this expressive and deeply moving piece. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/24/2019 6:42:00 PM
Oh! No I haven’t.. but I will check it out when I have a chance later. I’m sure it’s exceptional :))
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/24/2019 6:04:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful words and kind visit. Btw did you see my slave to love song I think you will like it.
Date: 7/24/2019 2:26:00 PM
aww John I have a lump in my throat reading your poem, you wove the titles in so brilliantly, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/24/2019 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate the kind words and visit!