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Chasing Rainbows

To ransom each tear fallen on your face And set their worth to appease your heart To search your soul for a love you can trace You quietly find reasons to depart As love can not flourish in passion's cold Nor be a shadow that hides in sunlight To travel roads in shoes that now are old And dress in rooms paid that glow with candlelight The empty life chose to chase riches spent That left furrows on your face etched by time And each breath taken filled with discontent While you wait, the amount of sunsets climb A memory shared, you did concede A world you sought I did not impede 6/21/17

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Date: 5/17/2020 6:02:00 PM
WOW!!!! Dear Frederick, this is quite touching, real and simply beautiful. I will keep this under my pillow.
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Date: 5/17/2020 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely sonnet my friend. A memory shared......thanks, SuZ
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Date: 5/17/2020 3:23:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Frederic - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard
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Date: 6/22/2017 10:04:00 PM
Back to Congrats!!!...Sir Frederic lol...all the best my friend...^WW^
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Date: 6/21/2017 9:35:00 PM
A supersonic sonnet my friend...we've all chased rainbows at one time or another...I did, but no pot of gold like they said lol...great job...all the best...^WW^
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Date: 6/21/2017 9:23:00 PM
This is brilliantly written Frederic! With words like "While you wait, the amount of sunsets climb" you have found new innovative ways to express the sadness felt. It is difficult to come up with new phrases that display such articulation. Bravo for this passionate and moving sonnet! I loved it! : )
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Date: 6/21/2017 5:00:00 PM
This was nicely done Frederic. There is a sad undertone to your work lately, I hope it is just your creativity flowing.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/21/2017 5:03:00 PM
Just creativity
Date: 6/21/2017 2:07:00 PM
A truly well-crafted sonnet! Nicely done mate
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