Chasing Colors

I
-- Stopped to chat: at the one store open
This second day of 2023 here:
Where a month from mid- December
Is the usual "holiday" for child & worker -- 
Mr. L saw me rush off chasing something
This new time had crimson skies, painting
I had not ever seen. Walked a mile
Down near the darkening sky, westward
And back as crimson faded into lines
Of orange, parallel lines; spruces behind
Greater pines behind in art in two colors
Blue background, crimson lines and forests

II
The darkening blue skies swallowed, gently
Bit by bit, the crimson that made me run
Down the hill, Kerk St., Adelaide, and back
To enjoy the gentler breeze at 8-0-clock
And dream of the vision of hope, I saw
From the Hand that might have made me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/8/2023 5:28:00 AM
Thanks sweet angels. U know who you are! And silent Angelles, too. Shalom shalom
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:39:00 AM
Hello Anil. Hi. Yes, I always see beauty in everything, however, I truly see and envision the beauty and moment of the scene of your entry and how with elegance you placed that moment into words. I believe you did see the hand that made you. Yes, yes and yes, how could you not with such an extraordinary encounter. As always, thank you for sharing. As always, Shalom Shalom Nasmaste Namaste. May this day find you well and safe. Love and Blessings always. Happy New Year.
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:55:00 PM
A wonderful/colorful write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 1/2/2023 6:30:00 PM
It is summer, eh? Anil, I put you in my quotes, in case you lose the internet over there! You are the third one down from the top....Happy New Year! XO ~Anaya
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Date: 1/2/2023 7:40:00 PM
Good morning, here, after 5 am & Yes, summer. Not as humid as Eastern USA. Thanx always Anaya. You're totally immersed & invested in PS, & know all the backroads & highways here. What a nice idea: quoting your fellow poets in your profile. You amaze me. Shalom shalom, Anil
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