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Rain waited for Bjorg to return, never gone long. He was a strange one, forgetting herself aptly. She couldn’t think of herself other than human, although she had never met anyone like she. Her father seemed to understand her somewhat. He had died almost five thousand years before. She knew that she could foresee the future, but in the deep recesses, she couldn’t see her death. She could feel no pain, though it mattered little. Nothing could harm her, so she dismissed threats. She didn’t live in the past, why she was as she was. She never wondered if she could ever change. Only lately the dreams returned, dreamt in the four thousand year sleep which Bjorg interrupted. It had been two glorious years since he woke her from sound sleep, hidden in the caverns of souls. She had never told him how long she was there. Even she did not know her past beyond this world. She knew how wicked it was and how many times she had destroyed it and left the way open to renew. Now the federation was arming to hold peace. Old lessons had not taught the valid point. She knew the instant she would have to destroy the world and Bjorg was standing in the way. She could not by Heavenly law reveal her face, that she was endowed to know the deadly hour, when she would chariot as the Angel of Death, through the skies by her two mighty white horses. 16 Dec 2010 Charles Henderson For Rambling Poet's "Rain, the Story" contest

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Date: 1/14/2011 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:25:00 PM
sounds like an analogy to our earth or something and she is the avenging angel. Very imaginative, Charles. A big congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:24:00 PM
Exceptional writing, Charles. Congratulations on your fantastic win in Constance's Contest. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:04:00 PM
I love the way Bjorg awakened her in the "caverns of souls," after sleeping for four thousand years. Interesting twist on the way she becomes the Angel of Death as she sails through the skies onher horses, Charles. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:52:00 AM
Wow! How imaginative. Congratulations Charles. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Charles
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:23:00 AM
right on, charles!! beautifully woven tale!! cheers for bagging a great win in the contest!! : ) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:17:00 PM
Many Congrats Charles on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:36:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry ... enjoy a well deserved top notch win with luv..
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Date: 12/16/2010 9:11:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 12/16/2010 12:49:00 PM
Oh my, Charles, I never imagined she was the "Angel of Death," but after rereading the poem it makes sense. That is why she couldn't see her own death -- she is immortal but inflicts mortality on others. Awesome entry for Constance's contest. Wishing you success with this incredible mind-bending write. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/16/2010 5:25:00 AM
~~~Magnificent~~~ Charles. The best to you in the contest. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:17:00 AM
Oh Charles, what a wonderful piece of writing. I love this story, how it is written, the flow, the imagery. Everything is good here. The ending is perfect. Very good, sir.
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