Change In the Till

indifference till the right deaths make the difference ***

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Gail Debole

Date: 5/30/2020 12:54:00 PM

You have a unique way of squeezing a mountain of meaning from a molehill of words. Made me think. BTW - How did you get the name Pigeon Tart? It's a nickname, right?

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/30/2020 2:12:00 PM

...it's Maureen btw :),

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/30/2020 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Gail. I only recently adopted the nom de plume. I was referred to as a pigeon here and then as a tart for my anti-bullying poem, little did they know I was a pigeon fancier, and my hubby had a clown character named Pi, so I was of course his Tart. I've wanted a handle since I got here, theory is they can't hurt me if I own them ;), xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/28/2020 4:54:00 PM

You are spot on my friend; spot on

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/28/2020 5:42:00 PM

Cha-ching ~x

Unknow Error

Date: 5/27/2020 7:43:00 PM

Impressive as usual, what a talent you've got/ To use so few words, to say quite a lot -UE

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/28/2020 7:29:00 AM

Thank you UE, my blessing/curse. xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/27/2020 5:10:00 PM

How sadly true - the 'wrong' deaths don't matter, I guess...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/28/2020 7:28:00 AM

Not in the grand scheme schemers scheme. ~x

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/27/2020 1:33:00 PM

Cash Causes Corruption; fortunately, Jared is too busy counting to procreate! Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/27/2020 1:35:00 PM

JOKE OF THE DAY!!!! I freakn love it! That's not an earthquake, that's me laughing that hard. <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/27/2020 12:17:00 PM

Imagine if Ivanna or Jared Kushner caught COVID and died. Think Mr. Pres. might have some second thoughts? (Honestly, I'm not sure he would. The guy is so heartless --- the ultimate egoistic narcissist). Smiles, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/27/2020 12:30:00 PM

Exactly. I watched "Dirty Money" on Jared Kushner a few days ago and I'm still reeling, grand mo seizures: my muse is having fits and spitting out things like this. I just obey and run for a pen ;), xomo <3