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The boat slowly turned at an unmarked waterway, and foliage dropped behind us like a curtain of green; as we glided between vegetation thick as a screen, everything was shades of green as civilization fell away. Thoughts of my altruistic devotion was beginning to sway, I had come to this wild place unseen; now I was regretting as I took a drink from my canteen, the real truth- my deep fear I was trying to downplay . . . Thousands of sounds and birds were loudly shrieking, and the dark slimy water held no reflection; I took a deep gulp- courage and words seeking, I wanted to proclaim loudly- CHANGE direction, please! Because, I swear this place is horrible and reeking, and for jungles it seems I have no affection . . . _____________________________ April 5, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/The Journey Copyright Protected, ID 18-1010-521-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 4/6/2018 3:35:00 AM
A tripple cheer for the outstanding way you fit the challenge words in so effortlessly Constance! Your story sounded very real and kept attention throughout! I hope this is a top winner for you. : )
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