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Champing The Seasons A March spring rose like December, pale shadows meet, by my shutter, blues screech, that I brooded over, ... my gist be faint, cause a clutter. As seasons shift their daily quest, recurrent graduate the stressed, the day soon proves to modify, this challenge is met, up go I. Like December, pale shadows meet, by my shutter, a March spring rose, --that I brooded . . . over, my gist . . ., be faint, cause a clutter, blues screech. Capricious seasons my journey, groove the best exact a tourney. 2020 September 28 *2nd Place* Charonnet ~~charles messina

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Date: 10/14/2020 12:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 10/14/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, Mark, and to you as well, Aloha! William
Date: 10/13/2020 9:33:00 AM
Many congrats on your win William:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, and my compliments on your 1st Place win too, Aloha! William
Date: 10/13/2020 8:31:00 AM
William, fine work of this difficult form my friend. Great poetry! Congratulations on your fine placement in my contest. I hope all is well. Best wishes...Charlie
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Hilo Poet
Date: 10/13/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thank you for the opportunity, Charles, all is well my friend, hope same be with you, Aloha! William
Date: 9/29/2020 1:22:00 PM
Lovely William. All best, Linda
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Date: 9/29/2020 2:14:00 PM
Hearty thanks all around, Linda, Aloha! William

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