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Cemetery Thoughts, Some Grave

The family plot’s on cold pavement and hidden in grass, but warm with familial heartbeats. Otherwise, the dead become spectrals, fearsome at midnight. —by poet Cemetery Thoughts, Some Grave Not dark and scary, slightly sunlit. walked the pavement, not like the unknown’s sentry, but still deliberately, in this quiet almost public space, a location hidden from me, though I stood right where I am now - over Grandpa’s coffin. Never thought of the placement, why? We lived out of town. My mom’s parents, too, reside with my uncle, twenty-five - who else? Great-grands, but to see them, that is their stones, I had to walk on grasslands and search. Photos taken, for dates, for notes. A former cemetery, so scary. Us four highschoolers drove in. It was a Winter’s midnight and snow fell. Normal. Until we left and found - it was snowing only on the hallowed grounds.

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Date: 6/18/2025 3:02:00 AM
Belated belated POTD Congratulations Kim on your excellent very engaging write! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Deb!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 6/7/2025 3:45:00 PM
This poem gives me a new dimension on how I perceive a cemetery. Honestly, I was always scared of cemetery since I was young. Now i could look at it as a sanctuary of peace. Thank you Kim. ^___^JCB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:05:00 PM
I am so glad that this poem helped you to see a cemetery in a new way. Bless you JCB!
Date: 6/3/2025 12:48:00 PM
Dearest Kim, your POTD just lingers with me, so gentle, honest, and full of quiet wonder. I felt the warmth of family even among gravestones, and your memory of snow falling only on hallowed ground gave me chills. Such an intimate walk through loss and legacy. Even in the most ordinary places, mystery and love are always waiting to be found. Congrats on POTD!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Kim, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 2:36:00 PM
I’m happy you liked this one, Daniel! Often a cemetery, though sad, isn’t scary but peaceful. Scary when midnight..lol
Date: 6/3/2025 1:09:00 AM
My belated congrats on your POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 12:57:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 5/31/2025 10:53:00 PM
Amazing writing. Love this. God bless you, and CONGRATS on POTD. love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2025 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Gina!
Date: 5/31/2025 8:24:00 PM
Last line got me... Congrats on potd, Kim! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 5/31/2025 8:14:00 PM
Our bodies return to dust, yet our spirit lives forever. Cemetery's are not scary, even though to some, they feel that way. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 9:08:00 PM
God bless you, Brandy! Thank you!
Date: 5/31/2025 7:22:00 PM
Dear Kim, Congratulations on POTD! Such a brilliant and deserving poem, my dear friend! Best, Anne
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, dear Anne!
Date: 5/31/2025 7:20:00 PM
Heartfelt congratulations on POTD, Kim. Such a wonderful, deserving poem! hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/31/2025 3:45:00 PM
WOW! HEY, HIP HIP HORRAH! CONGRATS ON POTD! from your biggest fan, lol- <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:16:00 PM
LOL..thank you kindly, Paige!
Date: 5/31/2025 12:31:00 PM
Huge congratulations on your POTD Kim! Oh what a feeling to stand over a family members grave~ surreal! I love your quote, can i steal it, lol...just did on same subject. I resonate with your experience, as its almost same for me. So worthy of poem of day, Love it!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/31/2025 1:04:00 PM
Oh, ha i was kidding, I kid you not, it's brilliant! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 12:53:00 PM
You can use it once on Poetry Soup with my name, if you want. Thank you so much!
Date: 5/31/2025 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Kim. You have handled the topic with respect and depth. Your writing style impresses me every time I read your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 12:55:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 5/31/2025 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Cemetery Thoughts, Some Grave" write. Have a blessed weekend.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! <3 & hugs
Date: 5/31/2025 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem winning POTD. It is unique and spectral. I like the sense of love that is felt by the family for the deceased Grandpa.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much! He died when I was 2 in a car accident. I’ve been told I was his favorite, I believe because I was around. Still that is so sweet to hear and he wrote poetry too! I have his poems. They are mainly love poems but there is one that is quite interesting. Hugs
Date: 5/31/2025 3:58:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 5/31/2025 3:34:00 AM
Hey Kimmie. Not a huge cemetery fan myself. Not sure I think of them as hallowed ground so much as necessary space. Still, for some a place to spur memories. Enjoy your special recognition for this interesting poem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 5/31/2025 2:14:00 AM
Hello Kim, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautifully written poem. Cemeteries are scary yet so peaceful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Zyrool!
Date: 5/31/2025 2:01:00 AM
Congratulations on winning potd Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 5/31/2025 1:33:00 AM
A scary place to be on a winter’s midnight Kim. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Beryl!
Date: 5/31/2025 1:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - In the sunshine it's a peaceful place to walk .... a little different at night :) - An interesting ending to this poem, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/30/2025 6:39:00 PM
Nice poem Kim. We forget cemeteries are hallowed places.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 7:14:00 PM
Yes!
Date: 5/29/2025 9:08:00 PM
Humility and respect for the death.Profound and deep.Best wishes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2025 9:36:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/29/2025 3:31:00 PM
This gave me chills, Kim. Wow. What an experience. Your quote, it touched me as well. I have a lot of feeling for the dead. Familial heartbeats will pass on too however, keeping tune...do you think? I wonder...<3
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Paige Hind
Date: 5/29/2025 7:47:00 PM
Okay, thanks for the explanation. <3 :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2025 7:15:00 PM
It was more a metaphor :) Thank you! …and yes, we skedaddled from the cemetery.

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